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Array ( [sid] => 113416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I’d Love to Get to Know You [time] => 2006-01-18 19:04:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What gives you pleasure

Arouses
Heightens the sensation
Enhances the affair
What brings you pleasure

What gives you hope
Faith
A devotion
A love deeper then the oceans
Why does it help to hope

What grants you life
Creator
Has stirred the night
And bore with it the day
Who takes your life

Is your body yours
Occupy
A resident soul
Define
What makes your body whole

Were you ever a child
Careless
An adolescent
Lessons on maturation
Have you ever grown old

Did you ever make a promise
Intended
Needed to keep
Deep in the dreams of your sleep
Locked in the cage of your gatekeeper’s key

What makes you want more
Strive
Are you suited for what you are fit for
Have you diluted the clarity
Or assessed the risk
What makes you think you get much more then this

What have you done
Incredulous
The halves weigh lighter then the sum
The summer fire
Rises with the moon as one
A strange desire
To want to get to really know someone


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I’d Love to Get to Know You

Contributed by Jyssvw on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 07:04:28 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



What gives you pleasure

Arouses
Heightens the sensation
Enhances the affair
What brings you pleasure

What gives you hope
Faith
A devotion
A love deeper then the oceans
Why does it help to hope

What grants you life
Creator
Has stirred the night
And bore with it the day
Who takes your life

Is your body yours
Occupy
A resident soul
Define
What makes your body whole

Were you ever a child
Careless
An adolescent
Lessons on maturation
Have you ever grown old

Did you ever make a promise
Intended
Needed to keep
Deep in the dreams of your sleep
Locked in the cage of your gatekeeper’s key

What makes you want more
Strive
Are you suited for what you are fit for
Have you diluted the clarity
Or assessed the risk
What makes you think you get much more then this

What have you done
Incredulous
The halves weigh lighter then the sum
The summer fire
Rises with the moon as one
A strange desire
To want to get to really know someone


__________________________________
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Re: I’d Love to Get to Know You (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:03:07 PM AEST
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Loved how you penned this. The fourth stanza is my fav, but the whole thing is a piece of art. Thank you for sharing. Peace. Laura


Re: I’d Love to Get to Know You (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:25:32 PM AEST
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I really do like this one very much. The styling fit the theme very well, and the word choice was excellent. This is very life-affirming, and appreciated, indeed.

Keep at it!

Andrew


Re: I’d Love to Get to Know You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:15:29 AM AEST
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You keep me coming to read your poems. you are so talented. Keep them coming.


Re: I’d Love to Get to Know You (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 08:31:14 AM AEST
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Strong, standing write.
A keeper, for someone. Thanks for sharing with all.


Brew~




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