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Array ( [sid] => 113375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deep sadness....... [time] => 2006-01-18 03:22:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why am I invisible to you?
Why do I walk past you,
Broken and ignored?
And though you may turn your head,
Your lips don’t speak,
And my ears hear only your silence.
Just leave me alone.
Just let the cold wind dry my tears.
Just leave the thorns in my heart,
And let the blood run dry.
Writing my poems
sometimes doesn't help
having to hide in my
words what I am not feeling
nor what I want to express
And I pace
Pride silencing the cries on my lips
Sorrow painting my face
Lonliness consuming me
And you are silent
Smiling on the outside
as I slowly die inside
with the memories of
things that were
hiding within words of
happiness, joy, love
Inside I have sadness
dislike for myself.........

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Deep sadness.......

Contributed by paul_x_walker on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:22:30 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Why am I invisible to you?
Why do I walk past you,
Broken and ignored?
And though you may turn your head,
Your lips don’t speak,
And my ears hear only your silence.
Just leave me alone.
Just let the cold wind dry my tears.
Just leave the thorns in my heart,
And let the blood run dry.
Writing my poems
sometimes doesn't help
having to hide in my
words what I am not feeling
nor what I want to express
And I pace
Pride silencing the cries on my lips
Sorrow painting my face
Lonliness consuming me
And you are silent
Smiling on the outside
as I slowly die inside
with the memories of
things that were
hiding within words of
happiness, joy, love
Inside I have sadness
dislike for myself.........

Copyright Â© paul_x_walker ... [ 2006-01-18 03:22:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Deep sadness....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:31:18 AM AEST
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awwww my poor baby.
Gives Jennifer a great big hug.
I love you honey don't ever forget that.

love and hugs mom

Re: Deep sadness....... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:32:17 AM AEST
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Any one that can write like this should have much confidense.
Even tho it's very sad it's a brilliant write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Deep sadness....... (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard2 on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 12:58:03 PM AEST
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How very sad. I feel for you excellent poem. bernard2

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