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[aid] => mick
[title] => OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
[time] => 2006-01-18 03:08:18
[hometext] => Watching the news 'bout a guy in New Orleans, USA
[bodytext] =>
SultryRose's Signatures
Hey man, shut yo trap
You let them school buses
drown instead of gettin yo people out.
You say, "God's angry with this world."
Save yo breathe go some where-n-hurl.
Oh what's his name say
"God's sending huricane afta huricane."
My God man, u r insane!
The God I hold dear to my heart
knows only luv from his start.
In the first place below
sea level ain't no good place
at least in my Earthly face.
Stand up and face yo own faults.
Thank God he's luving-n-place no fault.
[comments] => 16
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[informant] => emystar
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[ratings] => 13
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
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OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
Contributed by
emystar
on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:08:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
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SultryRose's Signatures
Hey man, shut yo trap
You let them school buses
drown instead of gettin yo people out.
You say, "God's angry with this world."
Save yo breathe go some where-n-hurl.
Oh what's his name say
"God's sending huricane afta huricane."
My God man, u r insane!
The God I hold dear to my heart
knows only luv from his start.
In the first place below
sea level ain't no good place
at least in my Earthly face.
Stand up and face yo own faults.
Thank God he's luving-n-place no fault.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2006-01-18 03:08:18]
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:20:00 AM AEST
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Bravo bravo.
you nailed it.
lol awsome job on this. |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by bernard2 on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:57:16 AM AEST
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| Too True Emy. we place all the bad on God instead of looking on our own front door step first. It is mainly man himself that is at fault. Too fast in traffic and a family dies who do people blame why it is easy God is the nearest and yet the farthest away from us.Hugs from Bernard2. |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 06:18:34 AM AEST
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| Excellent write. |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 10:57:54 AM AEST
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never truer a word spoken! building a city below sea level right where they know there's hurricanes then blaming God!
I know Jesus was talking about faith when he told the parable about the wise and foolish builders but I can draw some parrallels there!
If they read the bible properly they's see the devil is running this sytem of things.
Ooooh! hark at me getting all religiousy!
Great poem written in your marvellous trademark fashion.
J |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:41:41 PM AEST
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| Good subject to write about. I have to agree with the fact that New Orleans being built where it was was just stupid. I am not religious...spiritual yes, this is no act of a god of any kind. I think it is because of the acts of stupid fools who think they can out smart Mother Nature. She's gonna win everytime. Peace, Laura |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:33:32 AM AEST
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| Emy, you keep me wanting more of your poems, you are so talented, and I truly admire your works. Love this one too. |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Sinned on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:25:51 AM AEST
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Right on Emystar.If I'm right your talking of mayor Nagin of New Orleans. Shame he held no blame for himself only others.Good write.
Sinned |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Astralbermudian on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 06:37:53 AM AEST
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| yeah I agree with your little write here, sometimes I wonder, are we the one's planning our own armageddon? Well it doesnt change the fact that your an awesome writer and I wanted to say thanks for reviewing one of my poems a while back |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by boobiepeach on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 11:16:22 AM AEST
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this is touching. very poetic
very nice write
peach |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 09:55:45 PM AEST
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Incredibly moving Emy-
and such lovely music also..
..and a beautiful closing line:
"Thank God he's luving-n-place no fault."
I really enjoyed this..very much.
B
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 12:17:21 AM AEST
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Yeah emy ... like houses on sand ... but hey, it wasn't "his" fault .... right ? So who else can he blame ? I think it impressive that politicians will fight to remove God from school ... then turn around and blame him for their shortcomings ... go figure.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 12:47:18 AM AEST
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It's amazing that when things go wrong people question and blame God.
An oustanding and perfectly penned piece of poetry u have presented us with here my dearest Emy. So much truth within the lines.
God bless u and urs sweet lady.
*warm love n hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 01:02:55 AM AEST
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| Amazing write (as are all of your poems)...A great subject to touch on, and you're absolutely right. |
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Re: OH WHAT'S HIS NAME??
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 08:36:18 AM AEST
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Strong write my friend.
Well done.
Jeff |
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:18:53 AM AEST
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a lovely write thanks for sharing
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by Millennium on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 12:19:07 AM AEST
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