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[sid] => 113367
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Tripping Hard
[time] => 2006-01-17 23:42:25
[hometext] => Worst trip I've ever been on....anxiety.
[bodytext] => My eyelids are so h e a v y
They're so hard to hold open
thoughts still very much awake
too many words are being
spoken
How can one be so tired
but sleep cannot be found
Anxiety is a Schedule I drug, man
Found way to easily in my town
No need to trip on LSD
No. Not when your tripping on
major anxiety
Damn, I just need to rest now
Could I have some quiet, PLEASE
I've got to quit bugging out, man
Must learn to relax and
be at ease
Pretend
I am free
Be like the breeze...
just
gently
blow
away
Penned January 2006
Laura Horner
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 521
[topic] => 48
[informant] => deadheadpoet
[notes] => Let me remind you that Mick has stated before that he will not tolerate personal attacks on other members.
Mod 9
1/21/06
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
Tripping Hard
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 11:42:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My eyelids are so h e a v y
They're so hard to hold open
thoughts still very much awake
too many words are being
spoken
How can one be so tired
but sleep cannot be found
Anxiety is a Schedule I drug, man
Found way to easily in my town
No need to trip on LSD
No. Not when your tripping on
major anxiety
Damn, I just need to rest now
Could I have some quiet, PLEASE
I've got to quit bugging out, man
Must learn to relax and
be at ease
Pretend
I am free
Be like the breeze...
just
gently
blow
away
Penned January 2006
Laura Horner
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2006-01-17 23:42:25]
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 01:02:58 AM AEST
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Hello my friend,
I know what cha mean. 'course that's why I live in the country.
Still tho the **** can always hit the fan any where.
Good work, hope u get your rest.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:08:49 AM AEST
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I hope that this gently blows away for you.
A heartfelt poem, very moving and forthright
Michelle |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 11:06:34 AM AEST
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I can identify with this, I used to get major anxiety attacks felt like my heart was going to pop out of my mouth.
The doctor put me on beta blockers to slow me down,
then a year or so later I discovered dope did the same thing.
I gave that up started eating salads and cycling everywhere!
best home grown cure there was for me.
The exercise has def chilled me out.
I reward myself once every so often by going to the pub and getting ****** out of my head!
Nice work.
J
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by Poetic_Influence on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 12:39:55 PM AEST
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| you homeschool ur daughter and ur a crackhead, nice |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 01:06:26 PM AEST
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| poetic influence...that was uncalled for. I suffer from anxiety/panic disorder. I am not a crack head. I don't smoke that nasty stuff. Why would you judge me so. And you PM me and tell me not to judge you!!! For goodness sake. I do homeschool my daughter but again I assure everyone out here at YPDC . I DONT NOT SMOKE CRACK. How rude of you. I wish you peace, Laura |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 05:14:28 PM AEST
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Laura, unfortunately there will always be those who don't understand. Your poem was creative and heartfelt. I'm sorry you still struggle so, my friend. I too have had bouts with anxiety and panic. I guess what works for me is faith, as I know He is really in charge, even though I must still put forth the effort.
Peace be with you, my friend
Remember, you are worth the effort!
Will/Terry |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 08:47:09 PM AEST
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| Mod. 9....thank you for your note. I do appreciate it. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by freckle on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 09:29:04 PM AEST
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Good poem Laura. I suffer from anxiety attacks too. By accident, I have found a medication that has subdued them. (I was prescribed the medicine for one cause and found it worked for my anxiety.)
Anyway, I understand just needing peace sometimes. I think there are many who could relate to this poem.
Carol |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 02:40:51 AM AEST
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The title is what grabbed me by the neck and threw me around..lol
...not to steal a thought from the lines to follow-
Your fan-
Billy
P.S. >>>SEE LAURA'S NOTE HEREIN!!! |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 10:24:15 PM AEST
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Poetic influence, you have slandered somebody for no apparent reason whatsoever.
Consequently,you will be the recipient of my black venom from this day forward, particularly in regards to your poetry, which is, as I suspected, pathetic, and infantile. |
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Re: Tripping Hard
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:59:29 PM AEST
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I see everyone has changed their nics!
Laura; you pen with such simple precision and feeling, that leaves the reader wanting to know you as a person---as they should---for you are as straightforward and heartfelt as your writing suggests...Keep it up : )
Scorp. |
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