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Array ( [sid] => 113307 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Mom [time] => 2006-01-17 02:13:55 [hometext] => this is a letter i wrote to my mom tonight. [bodytext] => DO you know what it feels like
to have your mother,theone you lovem ore then anything in the world,kick u when ur down,
when ur ready to give up on this life,end it all,for her to just cuss at u & say boo hoo.& make fun of you.
Does she even realize how close ive been to leaving this world forever?
well tomorrow im leaving.
i know i cant survive without her.
but im gonna have to try
i cant be treated the way i am.
i cant be made to feel so dumb,so useless.
But i know im useless.
I dont need it to be rubbed in constently
i would say your taking me for granted,but what is there to take for granted.
i dont understand why everyone always tells me oh its all about me ohh poor brittney
when its never about me.never.
it hasnt been about BRITTNEY in years & years.
so i dont wnna hear that.
please dont tell me you love me
or pray to God
How much you lvoe me when im gone,
uv'e proven to me tonight just how much u "love" me
all i want,is a family,who loves me,& SHOWS it.
I want you,the way u were b 4 i had summer,i Dont want tohave a kid,Im 16.
this will never happen.
so what can i do?
i could face it.
but my "family" makes it hard to do.
everyone does.
theres nothin else to say i love u but obviously u dont love me back.
so goodbye.

ps:i missu,imiss our relationship b 4 i had her...
i loved u,more then anything & still do,justn ot with the love in return [comments] => 1 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 23 [informant] => poetrysavesme [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
Dear Mom

Contributed by poetrysavesme on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 02:13:55 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



DO you know what it feels like
to have your mother,theone you lovem ore then anything in the world,kick u when ur down,
when ur ready to give up on this life,end it all,for her to just cuss at u & say boo hoo.& make fun of you.
Does she even realize how close ive been to leaving this world forever?
well tomorrow im leaving.
i know i cant survive without her.
but im gonna have to try
i cant be treated the way i am.
i cant be made to feel so dumb,so useless.
But i know im useless.
I dont need it to be rubbed in constently
i would say your taking me for granted,but what is there to take for granted.
i dont understand why everyone always tells me oh its all about me ohh poor brittney
when its never about me.never.
it hasnt been about BRITTNEY in years & years.
so i dont wnna hear that.
please dont tell me you love me
or pray to God
How much you lvoe me when im gone,
uv'e proven to me tonight just how much u "love" me
all i want,is a family,who loves me,& SHOWS it.
I want you,the way u were b 4 i had summer,i Dont want tohave a kid,Im 16.
this will never happen.
so what can i do?
i could face it.
but my "family" makes it hard to do.
everyone does.
theres nothin else to say i love u but obviously u dont love me back.
so goodbye.

ps:i missu,imiss our relationship b 4 i had her...
i loved u,more then anything & still do,justn ot with the love in return




Copyright © poetrysavesme ... [ 2006-01-17 02:13:55]
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Re: Dear Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 09:40:14 AM AEST
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it may not seem like anyone cares, but you should look deep within yourself, you chose to follow god, thats why your on tihs earth, your a child of god and he loves you with all his heart, it would break his heart to see another one of his children kill themselves, just remember your never alone and you can pull through because he'll always be with you....you know killing yourself is what saiten wants...yeah so i personaly think thats horrible...well hope you feel better....




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