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Array ( [sid] => 113305 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => for intellectuals and Jungians only. [time] => 2006-01-17 01:29:29 [hometext] => -Mm... Jaded, shaded; ideal, denial; a-z, but no animosity; ambiguity.- (notes of course) [bodytext] => I plucked the fruit with a quick snap;
the branch flew back into the ecletric-chloro sun, rustling leaves. Again the tree content.
I, still not.

Its skin was tight, i thought, pressing with my thumb.

I washed it with tender care.
Cold water falling on my hands.
Cold water falling on my fruit.
And I rubbed.

Brought to my lips; leaching...white teeth beneath.

Finally!
I bite through the tart crust.
Eyes closed shut!
My mouth Splashes around the core.
-the core...
But should I bite some little more?

One last bite... We must try the whole!

Bitter! bad! sputter...
The seeds shot asunder.

grow forever more [comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Doggerel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

for intellectuals and Jungians only.

Contributed by Doggerel on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 01:29:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I plucked the fruit with a quick snap;
the branch flew back into the ecletric-chloro sun, rustling leaves. Again the tree content.
I, still not.

Its skin was tight, i thought, pressing with my thumb.

I washed it with tender care.
Cold water falling on my hands.
Cold water falling on my fruit.
And I rubbed.

Brought to my lips; leaching...white teeth beneath.

Finally!
I bite through the tart crust.
Eyes closed shut!
My mouth Splashes around the core.
-the core...
But should I bite some little more?

One last bite... We must try the whole!

Bitter! bad! sputter...
The seeds shot asunder.

grow forever more

Copyright © Doggerel ... [ 2006-01-17 01:29:29]
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Re: for intellectuals and Jungians only. (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 03:42:39 AM AEST
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I really like the flow and style of this poem... great piece of poetry...jh

Re: for intellectuals and Jungians only. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:47:59 AM AEST
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Well the title leaves me out! but i thought what the hell i'll take a look anyway, I am partial to the odd bit of jung though.

Seems like you've got a circle of life thing going on in this poem. I could actually feel and experience the descriptivness in this as I read.

Excellent work gotta be worth 5 stars of anyones vote.

J

Re: for intellectuals and Jungians only. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:05:51 PM AEST
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Very Vivid. good job with this write!

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