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Array ( [sid] => 113277 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What once was... [time] => 2006-01-16 14:39:10 [hometext] => ...a flower strong [bodytext] => We split about a year ago,
and that's become our past...
I'll never let you know,
because i'll never ask...

Will you ever let me in again?
by now, you're just a friend
but more inside,
i won't confide...

"I love you like a happy tear
streaming down a cheek,
I wish i had you more than near
so we could laugh all week..."

But, you are my closest friend
and I am yours as well
Perhaps we will before the end
be more than what we tell

.........................

Suffer

.........................

dw [comments] => 3 [counter] => 464 [topic] => 24 [informant] => In_a_While [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

What once was...

Contributed by In_a_While on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 02:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

We split about a year ago,
and that's become our past...
I'll never let you know,
because i'll never ask...

Will you ever let me in again?
by now, you're just a friend
but more inside,
i won't confide...

"I love you like a happy tear
streaming down a cheek,
I wish i had you more than near
so we could laugh all week..."

But, you are my closest friend
and I am yours as well
Perhaps we will before the end
be more than what we tell

.........................

Suffer

.........................

dw

Copyright © In_a_While ... [ 2006-01-16 14:39:10]
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Re: What once was... (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 04:04:41 PM AEST
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Well my dear friend I think you have two options here. 1. To tell ur friend that you still have deep feelings for her and that you would like to be more than friends or 2. Not say anything and continue on with life as good friends. Goodluck with whatever u decide.
A deep heartfelt write detailing of ones wish to have a love that's now lost. Well penned and expressed Dwayne.

But, you are my closest friend
and I am yours as well
Perhaps we will before the end
be more than what we tell

You never ever know what the future holds for u two my friend. The very best of wishes to u.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

Re: What once was... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 05:23:59 PM AEST
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I love you like a happy tear

this entire poem is beautiful but that set in my heart. Goodluck with this

Michelle

Re: What once was... (User Rating: 1 )
by geemunkey on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 05:23:30 PM AEST
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I really like it man. sounds tender.

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