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And in the comfort of their stillness, I can't think of a better place to be than where we are –
Here beneath a full moon’s blackened canvas, melting together in the warmth of embrace,
Chilled frost clutches the exterior of our blankets, unable to pierce the concealed; interlaced.
Passion cries out to night’s deafened ears - we lie encompassed, yet make not a sound,
And in the aftermath of our closeness, I can’t help but to hope we could never be found -
To remain lost in placates silence; cocooned in the affection reflected in your eyes,
Persuaded in the sense I could be content with you, here in my heaven beneath the sky.
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My Heaven Beneath The Sky

Contributed by Dragons_Of_Rose on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 02:28:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Gentle beams of light wash over us; silent confessions from the constellations of the stars,
And in the comfort of their stillness, I can't think of a better place to be than where we are –
Here beneath a full moon’s blackened canvas, melting together in the warmth of embrace,
Chilled frost clutches the exterior of our blankets, unable to pierce the concealed; interlaced.
Passion cries out to night’s deafened ears - we lie encompassed, yet make not a sound,
And in the aftermath of our closeness, I can’t help but to hope we could never be found -
To remain lost in placates silence; cocooned in the affection reflected in your eyes,
Persuaded in the sense I could be content with you, here in my heaven beneath the sky.

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Re: My Heaven Beneath The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 11:24:54 PM AEST
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My god this was beautiful....erotic....tastefully written and oh so romantic. Makes me want to grab my honey and a blankie and head out doors.....too bad I live in Missouri and it's cold as hec outside. lol Great write, thank you for sharing such an intimate experience. Peace to you, Laura

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