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[aid] => mick
[title] => Words:How they can be seen differently
[time] => 2006-01-16 10:28:59
[hometext] => just thinking
[bodytext] => Why do people hide thier feelings?
Do we all feel if spoken the words would not flow
They would go backwards, sideways ,to and fro?
If only we thought with the inner heart
It may make a difference from end to start
You open with a line, "how do you do"?
This gives a hope for the "me and you"
If ever asked if you are in need of a friend
Dont turn the page who lends a hand
So to the topic on what is seen
Feelings are just like unfinished dreams
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Words:How they can be seen differently
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brew
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Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:28:59 AM in AEST
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Why do people hide thier feelings?
Do we all feel if spoken the words would not flow
They would go backwards, sideways ,to and fro?
If only we thought with the inner heart
It may make a difference from end to start
You open with a line, "how do you do"?
This gives a hope for the "me and you"
If ever asked if you are in need of a friend
Dont turn the page who lends a hand
So to the topic on what is seen
Feelings are just like unfinished dreams
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Re: Words:How they can be seen differently
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:33:40 AM AEST
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your words r always beautiful as is your writting very lovely brew as always, as is also with your heart, no holding back here my friend . . .
(((((brew)))))))
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by bernard2 on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:41:29 AM AEST
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| Brew from what I have read of your poetry you always speak from the heart. Good strong poem wish I had written it bernard2 |
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:45:18 AM AEST
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| Deffanitly food for thought. well written and very open. I like this! good job |
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:47:48 AM AEST
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well said
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Re: Words:How they can be seen differently
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:59:12 AM AEST
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indeed feelings are like unfinished dreams, or they can be, made me think about all those times you come to a good bit in a dream and next doors dog barks and you try to go back to sleep but can't get your mind back in there.
Or when you feel a lot for someone and that person leaves and you get that horrible sinking feeling similar to a lucid dream you've been pulled out of it all seemed so real.
Yeah feelings are like unfinished dreams they can be so illusionary and frustrating!
God knows what I've just rambled on about!
Good thought provoking work well done.
J |
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 11:11:38 AM AEST
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Interesting write, Brew... so much truth to it..
Hugs
Jenni |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 01:41:10 PM AEST
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| Great thoughts! and great lines. I especially love the last line!! |
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Re: Words:How they can be seen differently
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 07:44:38 PM AEST
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As always dearest Dayna you always write from ur beautiful heart. A perfectly penned piece of poetry filled with honesty and truth. Well done and keep up the great work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:21:08 AM AEST
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...wow, brew, you took on the giants in this one...you did it so disarmingly, too...softly...gently...
...I really enjoyed a mellow feeling reading Johnny's comment...good poetry touches us...not just us, but "us," and not just "us," but "US..."...Johnny's very response compared to all the others illustrates the pervasiveness of the theme of your poem...why are all the others unwilling to share the personal experiences embodying the emotions this poem gently endeavored to touch...Johnny shares personal experience that embodies his feelings...he opens himself...he makes himself vulnerable...vulnerable suggests weakness, and if it is forced on a person, it may well...but for a person who chooses vulnerability, vulnerability is the greatest show of strength that exists...
...sometimes, I feel I share too much...I annoy people with my feelings, my thoughts, my philosophies, my experience...I feel the gift of poetry is the opportunity it offers the heart, soul, spirit and mind to connect with another heart, soul, spirit and mind...I enjoy sharing the point of connectedness...such a gift...
...see, I talk too much...
...why do people hide their feelings...fear...why are people fearful...because we each have to do battle with our own personalized "Boogey Man..."
...very stimulating expression...it motivated...caused movement...and you all the way over there in Texas...my, my, my...
...got to move on...
ron...enigma |
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 09:32:25 AM AEST
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This is well written and everything. You are talented. I really liked the last line. It touched me and I related. This poem is just simply brillant...
christina |
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 09:41:51 AM AEST
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I really like this Brew....
great message.
Jeff |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 09:45:14 PM AEST
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| Yes, and I probably say to much from my heart, but then again, I am not afraid to share, sometimes in my life it gets so good, I do have to pinch myself to see if I am in one big giant dream. and just like reading poetry, we can all read and hear from our hearts, and those words are all different to each one of us, amazing as it may seem. you have written a very wise write, and I can see our life is just one large page, we better not flip it, and not close the book until its time, I am wondering, if perhaps God is reading His book, and we are all the characters in a story, well, of course that is fantasy, but you can see how one can think. differently... and yes, your title, words... how they can be seen so so differently.. Raquel Leah |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 05:50:11 PM AEST
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I have felt this very much at certain times Dayna. How refreshing
it is when you meet someone willing to open themselves
up and really just, BE. I'm with Jecks ... love the last line.
So perfectly poetic!
~Breezy |
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Re: Words:How they can be seen differently
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by Spike on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 05:33:57 AM AEST
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Brew,
Straight from the heart - a message for the willing ear about being open and honest, without being cruel or tactless, or wastful (of emotions, of others). maybe not that neat, butI enjoyed this one.
Spike
P.S. I'm going to star you 5/5 in case that phantom coward is still out their dead starring real poets. |
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:40:32 PM AEST
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As long as I've known you..
I've ALWAYS admired your honesty and warmth-
These words ring true to me.
Love this-
B |
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 06:32:51 AM AEST
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I was just thinking,,,
you have the knack with words,
great Brew
coni |
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 09:33:56 AM AEST
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what an interesting topic to write about.
good write |
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by wizard on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:35:46 AM AEST
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you can't go wrong with a write like this...straight from the heart.
good job, dayna.
i enjoyed this.
wiz |
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