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Array ( [sid] => 113261 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Traces of her [time] => 2006-01-16 10:00:21 [hometext] => Another dual write...posted on another site first [bodytext] => Lingering breath on my skin
memories never forgotten
Like a warm gentle breeze
I feel the traces of her

Her scent still surrounds me
exciting me like no other
My yearning for her so intense
I smell the traces of her

Exquisite flavor on my lips
savored like ambrosia
Hungering for her return
I taste the traces of her

Lustful moans filled the night
like fine music to my ears
Echoes of our coupling entice
I hear the traces of her

Closing my eyes to see
her beauty I cannot forget
Compelling me to search on
I see the traces of her

My body responds in kind
throbbing with unrequited desire
Pulsing in time with my heart
I need the traces of her

My life was once so complete
our bodies melded as one
Our senses in tune to the night
now just traces of her

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 490 [topic] => 75 [informant] => crow6279 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Traces of her

Contributed by crow6279 on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:00:21 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Lingering breath on my skin
memories never forgotten
Like a warm gentle breeze
I feel the traces of her

Her scent still surrounds me
exciting me like no other
My yearning for her so intense
I smell the traces of her

Exquisite flavor on my lips
savored like ambrosia
Hungering for her return
I taste the traces of her

Lustful moans filled the night
like fine music to my ears
Echoes of our coupling entice
I hear the traces of her

Closing my eyes to see
her beauty I cannot forget
Compelling me to search on
I see the traces of her

My body responds in kind
throbbing with unrequited desire
Pulsing in time with my heart
I need the traces of her

My life was once so complete
our bodies melded as one
Our senses in tune to the night
now just traces of her

Copyright © crow6279 ... [ 2006-01-16 10:00:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Traces of her (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:02:08 AM AEST
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so wistful and bittersweet

Shari

Re: Traces of her (User Rating: 1 )
by MG_Akela22090 on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 06:32:16 PM AEST
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It's so beautiful, but sad. It's like you're talking about a ghost. This is just a beautiful write.

Re: Traces of her (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 12:35:23 AM AEST
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Damn, this piece left me with a tear in my eye. So sad...so lonely...you can feel your pain and your longing in this write. Exquisite. Peace to you, Laura

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