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Array ( [sid] => 113249 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Here is my poem Drowning. [time] => 2006-01-16 03:50:27 [hometext] => Just another one of my poems .. plz feel free to comment!!!This probably doesnt make any sense .. [bodytext] => I am drifting off as I was driving, I feel like I am drowning .
I am dreading and dreaming and hating the fact of drowning.
I am falling back into a dream and I am fearing the drowning again.

When I went jogging I was only kidding .. when I told you that you would be the one to do the dusting.

As I was dusting I heard someone knocking ,and then I realized it was you.
I knew I had been missing you because of the passing days.
You are always passing me by and you don`t even notice me are the messing place.
I miss the kidding around we used to do and the screaming of the two neighbors next door.
But now everything is lacking in this , so I guess I will just have to go on and keep dusting.

I am fearing the feeling I get when the hating and the begging of the two neighbor's next door.

So I go off to sleep again and dream of drowning.

And I wake to my scream , I just don't want to do this anymore dream of drowning it's scares me., [comments] => 4 [counter] => 464 [topic] => 14 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => .....edited for spelling as requested by mod_6....16-01-06 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Here is my poem Drowning.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 03:50:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I am drifting off as I was driving, I feel like I am drowning .
I am dreading and dreaming and hating the fact of drowning.
I am falling back into a dream and I am fearing the drowning again.

When I went jogging I was only kidding .. when I told you that you would be the one to do the dusting.

As I was dusting I heard someone knocking ,and then I realized it was you.
I knew I had been missing you because of the passing days.
You are always passing me by and you don`t even notice me are the messing place.
I miss the kidding around we used to do and the screaming of the two neighbors next door.
But now everything is lacking in this , so I guess I will just have to go on and keep dusting.

I am fearing the feeling I get when the hating and the begging of the two neighbor's next door.

So I go off to sleep again and dream of drowning.

And I wake to my scream , I just don't want to do this anymore dream of drowning it's scares me.,

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-01-16 03:50:27]
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Re: Here is my poem Drowning. (User Rating: 1 )
by LifeFadingAway on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 05:35:11 AM AEST
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I like it, dreams mostly have a meaning behind it but the person who dreams it is the ony one who can understand the true meaning.

Re: Here is my poem Drowning. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:24:43 AM AEST
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i like this your poetry certainly gives one somthing 2 grab on 2, very captivating right 2 the end . . .

Ben

Re: Here is my poem Drowning. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 11:58:04 PM AEST
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It makes perfect sense to me but it sounds more like a night mare rather than just a dream.
Keep up the good writing.
huggs,luv,
emy

Re: Here is my poem Drowning. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:28:58 PM AEST
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oh how many times have I drown, and woke up only to keep dusting. Dusting is ok, it will keep you from drowning, I can feel through your words how much you are reaching out, letting the reader know just how much you care and love. Raquel Leah

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