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Array ( [sid] => 113221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WALK................^_^ [time] => 2006-01-15 15:04:57 [hometext] => just another one of my poems .. plz feel free to comment!!! [bodytext] => I feel so much like a airlock because I want to go to badcock's.
I once climbed a beanstalk and did a boardwalk and a cakewalk.
Then as I was waking up I heard the sound of the clock .
I went to town and walk across the crosswalk and saw a hawk in a headlock.
Then I went walking down the sidewalk and i didnt know I was sleepwalking again.

When someone try to talk to me , that is when I woke up , and realized I was sleep walking again.

I thought to myself this was all a dream , I didnt want this to happen anymore , my sleepwalking. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 456 [topic] => 7 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

WALK................^_^

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

I feel so much like a airlock because I want to go to badcock's.
I once climbed a beanstalk and did a boardwalk and a cakewalk.
Then as I was waking up I heard the sound of the clock .
I went to town and walk across the crosswalk and saw a hawk in a headlock.
Then I went walking down the sidewalk and i didnt know I was sleepwalking again.

When someone try to talk to me , that is when I woke up , and realized I was sleep walking again.

I thought to myself this was all a dream , I didnt want this to happen anymore , my sleepwalking.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-01-15 15:04:57]
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Re: WALK................^_^ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:48:17 PM AEST
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I luv your unique writing style. Don't let any one change u.
I luv butterflys especially the yellow ones.
Good work. Bet that would be spooky to wake up sleep walking.
luv, huggs, butterfly smiles,
emy

Re: WALK................^_^ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:33:46 PM AEST
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wow, you sure know how to capture your reader, oh man, and you make me smile, you write with so much emotion, in one poem I find myself full of tears, passion, compassion, laughter in others, and keep writing, do not worry about style, your style is what it is. There are various types of styles, I know most of them, and when I use them, I feel stuck to a recipe, I like to write without measuring, and see how it turns out, nothing like a good cup of homemade soup you made yourself, all by yourself, with your own creative ingredients.. again, I will say to you, your style is what it is.. you created your own, and I love it. Raquel Leah

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