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Array ( [sid] => 113207 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let this go [time] => 2006-01-15 11:31:39 [hometext] => Guess this falls under emotional. None the less. I hope you all enjoy this one. Sweet and Short. Plz Rate n Comment. MaJ [bodytext] => ---------__________----------------

let me breath
choking from my sympathy
torn apart
by all the things you say

and we walk
a narrow path of destiny
and we break free
from apathy

it's deafening when you scream
and your words run through me
it's deafening when you scream
and your words run through me

and my whole world
falls apart when you are not around
and i try so hard to see you now

let me go
choosing everything we see
i hate this place
but i don't want to leave

we keep trying
to let this go [comments] => 6 [counter] => 523 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Let this go

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:31:39 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

---------__________----------------

let me breath
choking from my sympathy
torn apart
by all the things you say

and we walk
a narrow path of destiny
and we break free
from apathy

it's deafening when you scream
and your words run through me
it's deafening when you scream
and your words run through me

and my whole world
falls apart when you are not around
and i try so hard to see you now

let me go
choosing everything we see
i hate this place
but i don't want to leave

we keep trying
to let this go

Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2006-01-15 11:31:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let this go (User Rating: 1 )
by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:40:01 PM AEST
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Honestly, this is a good poem. But, it has a twisted sort of ring to it. I am almost unsure of the message you were trying to get across. Unless your message was, "BE CONFUSED" or "I am confused." I don't really kno, but besides the confusion, nicely written?

Re: Let this go (User Rating: 1 )
by sirbflean on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:09:08 PM AEST
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this is the way the world ends
this is the way the world ends
this is the way the world ends
not with a bang but a whimper.
t.s.elliot
"the hollow men"

Re: Let this go (User Rating: 1 )
by sirbflean on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:11:38 PM AEST
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this is the way the world ends
this is the way the world ends
this is the way the world ends
not with a bang but a whimper.
t.s.elliot
"the hollow men"

Re: Let this go (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 05:13:26 PM AEST
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ummmm... ok....

Re: Let this go (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 05:24:08 PM AEST
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interesting seems the wanting and knowing it is better to leave fighting

NS

Re: Let this go (User Rating: 1 )
by LifeFadingAway on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 06:00:49 AM AEST
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Good poem
It would be a good song lyrics

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