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Array ( [sid] => 113190 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life poetry. [time] => 2006-01-15 03:08:27 [hometext] => just another one of my poems .. plz feel free to comment!!! [bodytext] => I am so tired of being sad.

What happened to me just makes me mad.

This is my life I live it everyday.

There's not a moment that I feel okay.

This is my life ,I hate to say i'm Never happy , I just feel the pain.

I'm so tired of feeling this away.

I wish some day,it will all go away.

you've all abandoned me,Where do your loyalties lie.

I thought we were close, but it was a lie, I have to say.

I hate my life .... Why is it this away.

I just don't know what to say.

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Life poetry.

Contributed by Butterflygirl40 on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:08:27 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I am so tired of being sad.

What happened to me just makes me mad.

This is my life I live it everyday.

There's not a moment that I feel okay.

This is my life ,I hate to say i'm Never happy , I just feel the pain.

I'm so tired of feeling this away.

I wish some day,it will all go away.

you've all abandoned me,Where do your loyalties lie.

I thought we were close, but it was a lie, I have to say.

I hate my life .... Why is it this away.

I just don't know what to say.

Copyright © Butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-01-15 03:08:27]
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Re: Life poetry. (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:50:41 AM AEST
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hey i dont see nothing wrong with this poem.
........................ I wrote it and i only got one vote............. well some one could at least comment me on it..............................^_^ pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Re: Life poetry. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:52:00 AM AEST
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A ture treasure my friend honesty and deeply

heart felt made me sad but that's ok, it did

what it's suppose 2 do, make one feel . . .

Ben

Re: Life poetry. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:37:16 PM AEST
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say its life, and be thankful each day that you can get up out of bed, that is a great start. Thin line between being mad and sad.. know what I do at that moment, after a few cries, then I start to laugh and move on, I have a wonderful friend named Eddy Kent who can get me to laugh so hard when I felt nothing but crying my tears to an ocean.. but he knows how to get me back on track, find a good friend, one who will laugh with you. Raquel Leah

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