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Array ( [sid] => 113185 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE HURT,THE HATE,THE SADNESS [time] => 2006-01-14 23:26:53 [hometext] => extremely sad [bodytext] => GOD,WHY DID YOU TAKE THEM AWAY?
I LOVED THEM SO VERY MUCH..
MISSIN 'EM SO BADLY,NO WORDS TO SAY..
CANNOT FEEL THEIR LOVING TOUCH..
I HATE YOU GOD,FOR YOU ARE SO CRUEL!!
BITTER IS MY LOVE,FEELIN LIKE A FOOL..
MY LIFE IS NOW GONE,FOREVER CHANGED..
LIFE'S DESTINATION NOW TOTALLY REARRANGED..
NO SUN TO SHINE,NO SMILES TO SEE..
WHATEVER COMES ALONG,WELL SO LET IT BE..
NO MORE PROBLEMS TO WORRY ME!!!!

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THE HURT,THE HATE,THE SADNESS

Contributed by sassydovebird on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 11:26:53 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

GOD,WHY DID YOU TAKE THEM AWAY?
I LOVED THEM SO VERY MUCH..
MISSIN 'EM SO BADLY,NO WORDS TO SAY..
CANNOT FEEL THEIR LOVING TOUCH..
I HATE YOU GOD,FOR YOU ARE SO CRUEL!!
BITTER IS MY LOVE,FEELIN LIKE A FOOL..
MY LIFE IS NOW GONE,FOREVER CHANGED..
LIFE'S DESTINATION NOW TOTALLY REARRANGED..
NO SUN TO SHINE,NO SMILES TO SEE..
WHATEVER COMES ALONG,WELL SO LET IT BE..
NO MORE PROBLEMS TO WORRY ME!!!!

Copyright © sassydovebird ... [ 2006-01-14 23:26:53]
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Re: THE HURT,THE HATE,THE SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 11:40:18 PM AEST
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i love the thoughts that came to mind. your poem wasnt extremely well written, but it does suffice to lending your pain. your rhyme scheme is also interesting if not a bit forced at times. all the capital letters wears a bit on the nerves. but like i said, i loved the thoughts i got from this poem, so im glad you wrote it.

Re: THE HURT,THE HATE,THE SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:39:01 AM AEST
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It was so vary sad and you emotions were so painfully clear. You projected them well, I think. It's very punk rock, as odd as that sounds. And I like punk rock, so that's a good thing.

Re: THE HURT,THE HATE,THE SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:30:44 AM AEST
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HAI MEMBER, PROBLEMS/SADDNESS ARE LIKE FEELINGS OF RELIEF/HAPPINESS. READ MY POEMS THAY TELL U THE PATH.
GIRISH.

Re: THE HURT,THE HATE,THE SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:00:01 PM AEST
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a good poem but i dun like the whole "blaming God" thing, but no worries, i think everyone resorts to that at sometime in their lives. thanks for sharing

Blessed Be
Jenni xxoo

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