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while people sit and stare
and you wishin its not true
while yellin out "I love you"
i want to jump down
laughin like an insane clown
with suicide on my mind
knowin lovin you was a crime
tears runnin down my face
fallin at a faster pace
so save me if you can
and tell me I'm your man
cause if Ican recall
it don't hurt to fall
its the sudden stop at the end
sittin here with out a friend [comments] => 3 [counter] => 534 [topic] => 43 [informant] => crazie_insane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

fallen

Contributed by crazie_insane on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 07:32:37 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I see death in the air
while people sit and stare
and you wishin its not true
while yellin out "I love you"
i want to jump down
laughin like an insane clown
with suicide on my mind
knowin lovin you was a crime
tears runnin down my face
fallin at a faster pace
so save me if you can
and tell me I'm your man
cause if Ican recall
it don't hurt to fall
its the sudden stop at the end
sittin here with out a friend

Copyright © crazie_insane ... [ 2006-01-14 19:32:37]
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Re: fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 07:58:10 PM AEST
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Sad but written incrediably.
Luv your pen name. I'm nuts to at times.
Keep up the great writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 04:38:45 AM AEST
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Very close to song lyrics - you should rework this wth a chorus. I really liked this one - it gets better with each read.

Spike

Re: fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 11:07:32 PM AEST
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This is the kutest poem! But who are you really? Why is my name on your interest. Do I know you? But any who, write more poems...this one was awesome. This almost sounds like what my Justin (Meany) would write, not like you would know him or anything. But I know he didnt write this. I only wish he knew how much I miss him since the day I got scared and ran from everyone. But he hates me cause I broke his heart. But this poem was kute and relates to everything. I sound stupid. I'm really sorry KUTE POEM KEEP WRITTING!
Baby_Grl

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