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Array ( [sid] => 113172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cant think of a title [time] => 2006-01-14 18:56:26 [hometext] => well im not to sure wat its about,i spose i was just writtin about a freind of mine.and i cant spell 4 my life so sorry. [bodytext] => counting the secounds until you can go home,
but when you can,you dont want to,so you hang around alone,
the shadows are growing under your feet,
as the friction between us increases the heat.
they old wounds open up,and carry on bleeding,
they do it again,and again,and now have you pleeding.
you've built a shild of there lies,which protects you when u close your eyes,
i no of the tears that people have cried,
and the feeling that no one is on your side,
i no of the countless knights you spent praying,
and the haunting sound of the words they were sayin.
there cold laughter all around you,where ever you turn,
piercing so deep, the laughter seems to burn.
the fear and fustration,and hatered you feel,
with such deepnes and enthusiasm,they almost seem unreal,
and you no that one day youll get away,
but the wounds constantly deepen until that day.

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cant think of a title

Contributed by kiza on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 06:56:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

counting the secounds until you can go home,
but when you can,you dont want to,so you hang around alone,
the shadows are growing under your feet,
as the friction between us increases the heat.
they old wounds open up,and carry on bleeding,
they do it again,and again,and now have you pleeding.
you've built a shild of there lies,which protects you when u close your eyes,
i no of the tears that people have cried,
and the feeling that no one is on your side,
i no of the countless knights you spent praying,
and the haunting sound of the words they were sayin.
there cold laughter all around you,where ever you turn,
piercing so deep, the laughter seems to burn.
the fear and fustration,and hatered you feel,
with such deepnes and enthusiasm,they almost seem unreal,
and you no that one day youll get away,
but the wounds constantly deepen until that day.

Copyright © kiza ... [ 2006-01-14 18:56:26]
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Re: cant think of a title (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:45:21 AM AEST
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nice emotions

Re: cant think of a title (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 12:35:59 PM AEST
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WOW!! this is really good!! i enjoyed reading this poem! i no about this, not a nice feeling!
"i no of the tears that people have cried,
and the feeling that no one is on your side," i no that exact feeling! its horrible!! good luck!!
You are a gr8 writer!! keep it up
/Luv
~*~ JeN ~*~
~*~ XxX ~*~

Re: cant think of a title (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:42:20 PM AEST
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I agree, I really liked this write. Keep it up! :-)

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