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Array ( [sid] => 113169 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tears [time] => 2006-01-14 18:04:33 [hometext] => i just wrote this could you take a look and tell me what you think [bodytext] => These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

A world of hate,
A friend that’s gone,
An everlasting pain,
Have to start again at dawn.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

Silent days,
Thoughtful nights,
Uncomfortable conversations,
Many more fights.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

Another fight between us,
Another tear I cry,
Apologises all round,
But all I want to do is die.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

Put on a brave face,
And beat the crowd,
Fool everyone around you,
Make your friends proud.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

Your home again,
You can let yourself go,
No need to pretend,
Time for another cry, no-one will know.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And that was the cost!

~*~xXx~*~ [comments] => 5 [counter] => 491 [topic] => 48 [informant] => JenJen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Tears

Contributed by JenJen on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 06:04:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

A world of hate,
A friend that’s gone,
An everlasting pain,
Have to start again at dawn.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

Silent days,
Thoughtful nights,
Uncomfortable conversations,
Many more fights.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

Another fight between us,
Another tear I cry,
Apologises all round,
But all I want to do is die.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

Put on a brave face,
And beat the crowd,
Fool everyone around you,
Make your friends proud.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost…

Your home again,
You can let yourself go,
No need to pretend,
Time for another cry, no-one will know.

These tears I cry,
The nights I’ve lost,
My hearts been broken,
And that was the cost!

~*~xXx~*~




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Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 06:22:40 PM AEST
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yes, very painful write... hang in there.. Raquel Leah.. wonderful poem..

Put on a brave face,
And beat the crowd,
Fool everyone around you,
Make your friends proud.

What would happen, if a person showed him/herself naturally, smiling when necessary, crying when necessary, showing love always...


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by kiza on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 07:05:02 PM AEST
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that was an amazin poem.how old are? i wish i could write like that!!!!!


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:49:40 AM AEST
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aww sadness.... but i really enjoyed this one!!! great write keep it up!

Blessed Be
Jenni xxoo


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:53:07 PM AEST
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WOW...I could feel every inch of pain you are expressing!good luck with this!


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by princess_of_pain on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 11:07:06 PM AEST
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great poem, very powerful. ur an amazing writer!!




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