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Array ( [sid] => 113165 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I will destroy the sun [time] => 2006-01-14 14:17:53 [hometext] => Again i must thank Churchill for requesting this in class, and my class mates, for giving me such unique words. she has opened me up to new forms of poetry, and it's still me. [bodytext] => I will destroy the sun,
In all of it’s golden splendor.
Use my permanent marker,
Attempt to blot out the light,
That radiates like perfume.

I will demolish the superfluous day,
Steal the gay aura from the orb,
Allow the peace of the night to roam,
Free the misunderstood veil.
Create the absolute power she so deserves.

I will make day the foul hour,
And permit the night to rule supreme.
Show them that night is without comparison.
Then all shall know of Night’s true beauty,
And realize that the mysterious day is illusion.

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I will destroy the sun

Contributed by AshRayne on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 02:17:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I will destroy the sun,
In all of it’s golden splendor.
Use my permanent marker,
Attempt to blot out the light,
That radiates like perfume.

I will demolish the superfluous day,
Steal the gay aura from the orb,
Allow the peace of the night to roam,
Free the misunderstood veil.
Create the absolute power she so deserves.

I will make day the foul hour,
And permit the night to rule supreme.
Show them that night is without comparison.
Then all shall know of Night’s true beauty,
And realize that the mysterious day is illusion.

Copyright Â© AshRayne ... [ 2006-01-14 14:17:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I will destroy the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:27:41 PM AEST
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i love this...brilliant..it is beauty within darkness..awsome write.

Re: I will destroy the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 09:25:20 AM AEST
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black is beauty and your poem indicates that. nice piece. but the real beauty is seen with the light. thanks for sharing. read my poems on nature.
girish

Re: I will destroy the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:44:27 AM AEST
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great write, i feel the same way, everyone sleeps during night missing the most beautiful show of stars and the moon! thanks for sharing, keep it up!

Blessed Be
Jenni xxoo

Re: I will destroy the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:16:06 PM AEST
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I really like ur style of writing. The imagery u cast into ur readers head is dynamic. The rhyme and flow sensational. A brilliant and well penned poem filled with darkness.
Awesome writing. Well done Ash.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

Re: I will destroy the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Midnight on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 06:04:13 PM AEST
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you make me want to talke churchills class ash well keep up the good work sory i dont have much to say
~ midnight

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