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[aid] => mick
[title] => Hope; a question. (Redeem Me)
[time] => 2006-01-14 13:22:16
[hometext] => I'm curious if I wrote this poem right...what do you see when you read it?
[bodytext] => desecrated hollow hematite eyes sadistic desire dances upon the edge of a knife. smiling as I stagger Towards slaughter. The onslaught of thousands painting melodies in flux like a reddened tide of which my heart has sunken from birth. Who knew that what was hollow what was blind and black and out of breath could so Redeem Me? It is you, the angel of death incarnate, the angel of black redemption. The Opressor. The Master. Of blood-tinted fantasies surpassing all understanding I find solace in a hopeless flux. The paradox of love and innocence pay homage to a dream deferred-- pay homage to the spiraling hellbound generations. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 443 [topic] => 59 [informant] => sweetdreamsaremadeofthis [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
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