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Array ( [sid] => 113156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold as Stone [time] => 2006-01-14 09:21:04 [hometext] => Many people could relate to this... [bodytext] => She hides behind those wide eyes; that beaten body and mind. Rings under her eyes show sleepless nights and years beyond her own.
Broken down. Beaten down. Killed in every way. Life just going down the drain. Darkness drowning everything. Where's the life she had before? What happens now?
She can't hide the years. She can't hide the pain, but they don't see it anymway. Why won't she just disappear?
She can't hide behind that broken body. Gashes in her arms; blood dripping down her sides. She can't hide. It's all gonna be said one way or another.
No one will ever know the glass she uses to hurt herself with. No one can ever see her crying. This girl is made of stone.
Down the halls, she walks. No flaws in her gait. She hides behind those wide eyes; beaten body and mind.
Here scars are hidden under her skin. There's nothing left to see here.
This girl is as cold as stone. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MG_Akela22090 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Cold as Stone

Contributed by MG_Akela22090 on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 09:21:04 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She hides behind those wide eyes; that beaten body and mind. Rings under her eyes show sleepless nights and years beyond her own.
Broken down. Beaten down. Killed in every way. Life just going down the drain. Darkness drowning everything. Where's the life she had before? What happens now?
She can't hide the years. She can't hide the pain, but they don't see it anymway. Why won't she just disappear?
She can't hide behind that broken body. Gashes in her arms; blood dripping down her sides. She can't hide. It's all gonna be said one way or another.
No one will ever know the glass she uses to hurt herself with. No one can ever see her crying. This girl is made of stone.
Down the halls, she walks. No flaws in her gait. She hides behind those wide eyes; beaten body and mind.
Here scars are hidden under her skin. There's nothing left to see here.
This girl is as cold as stone.

Copyright © MG_Akela22090 ... [ 2006-01-14 09:21:04]
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Re: Cold as Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:09:45 AM AEST
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I thought this was a fairly good poem I think it
would be better in actual lines though. Yeah I
can totally relate to the pain and self-injury
described in this poem it takes me back to a
place where I never want to go again. I hope
writing is an outlet for you.

Bobo (Joel)

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