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[sid] => 113041
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Destroy the daughter of we
[time] => 2006-01-12 11:45:21
[hometext] => My concerns for my daughter
[bodytext] => How could you not know? Why can't you just see? How you're destroying the daughter of we. I understand what you want her to learn But the words you use, you need to discern Yes, there are many areas she needs to improve But to tear down with words of hatred don't make her move She's defeated being called a failure before doing anything So why try--the label of never succeeding is already sticking I'm very sorry if these words sound unkind-- But the power of the tongue destroys or is kind Which choice of words would sound better and loving to those you speak to "You are a nobody", "a loser", "never be anything", "not cool" OR "you can do it"--"I'm completely behind you"--"Let's work together" Then maybe add an "I love you" no matter the effort--it's better! You haven't seen or even stopped to listen Her cry out for love and the tears that glisten She sees how you can easily hug others with care Then wonders silently what you with her no hugs share When the sudden demands come harshly for things to be done She responds with no respect due to 'no love--no action' You ask why I won't back you in your demands to obey I do, but not exactly in the harsh demanding way Please reconsider a more loving approach in your requests I think that would really show that you care and that would be best Eventually this daughter's self esteem will begin to grow Then all tension and anger between you both will cease to flow I really hope you will know and hope you will see That we must not destroy this daughter of we! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Lin54 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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