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Once I had a pet named Mr. Fritter-
Who was a funny looking critter-
For he was fuzzy and slightly blue-
And how he got that way I haven’t a clue…

His house was made from a mason jar-
Which I found under our rusty old car-
And it seemed to be for him just right-
For it was the perfect height…

He used to climb in the grass and play-
And throughout the day that is where he would stay-
Then at dark he would look up into the sky-
And wish that someday he would learn to fly…

But then he began to hide from me-
But then one day in his house I did see-
Standing before me was such a beautiful sight-
Mr. Fritter had wings and colors so bright....
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MR. FRITTER THE FUZZY CRITTER

Contributed by hoist1atca on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 11:14:30 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry

Once I had a pet named Mr. Fritter-
Who was a funny looking critter-
For he was fuzzy and slightly blue-
And how he got that way I haven’t a clue…

His house was made from a mason jar-
Which I found under our rusty old car-
And it seemed to be for him just right-
For it was the perfect height…

He used to climb in the grass and play-
And throughout the day that is where he would stay-
Then at dark he would look up into the sky-
And wish that someday he would learn to fly…

But then he began to hide from me-
But then one day in his house I did see-
Standing before me was such a beautiful sight-
Mr. Fritter had wings and colors so bright....

Copyright © hoist1atca ... [ 2006-01-10 23:14:30]
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Re: MR. FRITTER THE FUZZY CRITTER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 01:00:37 AM AEST
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ah how sweet, was thinking it might have been a hampster lol.. oh this is cute.. Raquel Leah

Re: MR. FRITTER THE FUZZY CRITTER (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 01:05:49 AM AEST
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This is so cute!!!The story of a caterpillar that morphs into a magnificent butterfly. Beautiful.
Thanks for sharing this one.
~Jenny~

Re: MR. FRITTER THE FUZZY CRITTER (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 02:41:36 AM AEST
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Nice write ,Light and airy and Happy . Thank you for the smile.

Whisper

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