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Die.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:12:44 PM in AEST
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I want to die cant you see there isnt nothing left here for me.
I apply to you that I want you to buy me some time.
I am going to tell everyone bye..
Please do not cry for me when I die.
I have deny myself of all lies.
Please when I die , please go and dry your eyes .
I want to fly like a bird in the sky.
Tell my mom hi for me when I die and tell her please dont cry for me.
When I die I hope you are near but please dont cry for me.
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Re: Die.
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by Aquaelius on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 12:38:52 AM AEST
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Don't die... it's actually pretty good. Strangely playful with it's rhyming. Very touching at the end. Thanks for sharing.
Aq. |
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Re: Die.
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by cheralex on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:48:22 AM AEST
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| I hope this isn't a cry for help... when ever i read poetry with this sort of stuff I feel like somewhere someone is suffering and asking for help! |
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Re: Die.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:41:57 PM AEST
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your writting is your salvation u will never desert it, your style even more than the content is a dead give away 2 your turmoil
that leads u 2 write these epressions of desperation, none the less they r verry effctive in a carthartic way, as 4 wanting 2 die,
no want's 2 die, as much as they wanna live according 2 there own ideals, great writting.
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Re: Die.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 04:34:32 AM AEST
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Such a sad write but I think you really know in your heart someone will always be there to love you and will definitely cry if you die.
A very heartfelt write.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Die.
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by XXpurpleducktapeXX on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:27:12 AM AEST
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| This one makes me sad it makes me thinking about neil |
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Re: Die.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:45:03 PM AEST
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| I know,sometime I feel low in spirit, but I also know, I cannot leave to go to heaven until God says so, so, I just keep doing all that I can while I am here, and actually, I love life here... reason why, I make it fun, and loving. Raquel Leah |
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