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Array ( [sid] => 112845 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mirror [time] => 2006-01-09 15:46:16 [hometext] => Not too sure about this one. Might be one of the worst one yet. Plz tell me how you feel about it. [bodytext] => My life is like a mirror
It reflects anything you want to see
And nothing you don’t
But there are times that mirror breaks
And others can see what is hidden
Behind blind eyes
So I pick up the pieces
Of thy life and spill more of my life
I see the bloody chaos of my life
And loathe it

I try to smash it
Until there is nothing left
But I lose more blood
And do more harm then good
I just want it all to end
The pain,
The magnificent
All-consuming pain

With this last contemplation
Running through my head
I see all those around
And how I’ve let them down
Now it not the time
I must not be egotistical
I must stand tall
And be who I want to be
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 60 [informant] => dalamar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Mirror

Contributed by dalamar on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:46:16 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

My life is like a mirror
It reflects anything you want to see
And nothing you don’t
But there are times that mirror breaks
And others can see what is hidden
Behind blind eyes
So I pick up the pieces
Of thy life and spill more of my life
I see the bloody chaos of my life
And loathe it

I try to smash it
Until there is nothing left
But I lose more blood
And do more harm then good
I just want it all to end
The pain,
The magnificent
All-consuming pain

With this last contemplation
Running through my head
I see all those around
And how I’ve let them down
Now it not the time
I must not be egotistical
I must stand tall
And be who I want to be

Copyright Â© dalamar ... [ 2006-01-09 15:46:16]
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Re: Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by ebooibo on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:25:26 PM AEST
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thats cool yo i feel ya pain

Re: Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessie53067 on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:52:26 PM AEST
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I see all those around
And how I’ve let them down

Not everyone dear, you could never let me down.

I must stand tall
And be who I want to be

I'm glad that you feel that way now, that you see that you just have to be yourself and ***** everybody else. And, hopefully, you'll find that someday you'll no longer need your mask either.

-Jessie

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