Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:55:22 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 112791 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crimson Piano Score [time] => 2006-01-08 17:44:26 [hometext] => i can add plenty more on to this one...comments appriciated [bodytext] => Crimson keys
Black and white,
A flickering ray of light
It slowly pieces together
Just like my life:
Beautiful...
But somehow not right

Music is spilling;
Escaping my veins
Tearing through the atmosphere
Expressing my pain

Beautiful harmonies
On their own
Beautiful crimson keys
But nothing more to show
Bleed so deep
I am alone,
The blood I weep:
Remains unknown

Secluded from the world
Retired to my music
So Beautiful
So tragic
So addicting
It's almost toxic

Unimaginable,
But I'm living it
Unbelieveable:
The punishment
Unfit

Blood
Staining the tiles
The bitter memories
The skin-deep smiles
The reality of it all
The truth
The pain when I fall

To lay down on the floor
To slowly die
See the blood from beneath the door
To discover my masterpiece,
And my last paino score

Crimson keys
Black and white
It's beautiful...
But somehow not right

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 75 [informant] => SmileSkinDeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Crimson Piano Score

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 05:44:26 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Crimson keys
Black and white,
A flickering ray of light
It slowly pieces together
Just like my life:
Beautiful...
But somehow not right

Music is spilling;
Escaping my veins
Tearing through the atmosphere
Expressing my pain

Beautiful harmonies
On their own
Beautiful crimson keys
But nothing more to show
Bleed so deep
I am alone,
The blood I weep:
Remains unknown

Secluded from the world
Retired to my music
So Beautiful
So tragic
So addicting
It's almost toxic

Unimaginable,
But I'm living it
Unbelieveable:
The punishment
Unfit

Blood
Staining the tiles
The bitter memories
The skin-deep smiles
The reality of it all
The truth
The pain when I fall

To lay down on the floor
To slowly die
See the blood from beneath the door
To discover my masterpiece,
And my last paino score

Crimson keys
Black and white
It's beautiful...
But somehow not right

Copyright © SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2006-01-08 17:44:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Crimson Piano Score (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 08:30:52 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

A good write...I enjoyed the first verse through to the last.

Re: Crimson Piano Score (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 10:32:56 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I found this through the comments box and the title made me want to read it. I can't believe a piece this evocative and emotional has only had one comment, I loved it!

Dom

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com