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with your sweet charm and loving face
through all the times i wanted to bail
you convinced me there was no way i'd fail
i dont think you could have been more wrong
while on the edge im trying to hold strong
you hold one hand with me dangling so near
dont let go i say with so much fear
in your eyes the heart goes weak
while your hands strong grip i try to seek
but no longer is it strong and tight
so much for holding with all your might
i slip through your fingers and with one last cry
i say i love you and a final goodbye
while i fall i take a final look at you
you tried to save me that i knew
thank you for the kisses and sweet song
but the hole in the ground is were i belong [comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 32 [informant] => rememberbecca [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

You let go

Contributed by rememberbecca on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 11:46:43 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You gave me a reason to stay in this place
with your sweet charm and loving face
through all the times i wanted to bail
you convinced me there was no way i'd fail
i dont think you could have been more wrong
while on the edge im trying to hold strong
you hold one hand with me dangling so near
dont let go i say with so much fear
in your eyes the heart goes weak
while your hands strong grip i try to seek
but no longer is it strong and tight
so much for holding with all your might
i slip through your fingers and with one last cry
i say i love you and a final goodbye
while i fall i take a final look at you
you tried to save me that i knew
thank you for the kisses and sweet song
but the hole in the ground is were i belong

Copyright © rememberbecca ... [ 2006-01-08 11:46:43]
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Re: You let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:45:36 PM AEST
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This is really sad.... Hope all is well ..
Jenni

Re: You let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 08:01:09 PM AEST
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A solid debut! Gentle and simple, all together giving a sad effect. I do too hope all is well. Welcome to YPDC. Hope to read more.

- SCM

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