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Makes all you want become defined
Pondering thoughts which fill the head
Gives you hope of which seemed dead
You dream of things that would bring smiles
Then the reality hits :was it worth the miles
The simple hopes that were brought in time
Have now surpassed and lost behind

take what one has been given, and never act unrational, nor uncondictional
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Whispers that can not be Heard

Contributed by brew on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 10:01:07 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Simple whispers in the mind
Makes all you want become defined
Pondering thoughts which fill the head
Gives you hope of which seemed dead
You dream of things that would bring smiles
Then the reality hits :was it worth the miles
The simple hopes that were brought in time
Have now surpassed and lost behind

take what one has been given, and never act unrational, nor uncondictional

Copyright © brew ... [ 2006-01-07 22:01:07]
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 11:41:03 PM AEST
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Lovely words, Brew...
I called MH today and we had a lovely chat. I really miss him and his poems....but happy to hear that he was doing well.....
You have a great year!!!
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard2 on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 05:07:56 AM AEST
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Some good words of advice and wisdom in this poem. Great poem brew. bern

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:17:09 AM AEST
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oh brew, such beauty expressed in simple ways u speak 4 the heart as well as from it, most lovely my friend as always . . .

((((((((Brew)))))))))

Ben

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 03:24:59 AM AEST
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Brew, I agree with Bern, you've expressed some deep and shared philosophical life lessons here plainly and honestly.

Spike

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:26:41 PM AEST
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never act unrational, nor uncondictional!
well that's me ******! great work.

J

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:20:31 PM AEST
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you are correct.. listen to your heart, there are true whispers that come there and will never be lost or left behind .. lovely write, thank you for the wisdom Raquel Leah

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 09:34:25 AM AEST
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True words. This was well written and the ryhmes were beautiful. Great poem.

christina

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 05:34:06 PM AEST
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Dear Dayna, how wonderful a write! I couldn't agree more
with the sentiment that lies herein. You penned this
very well, my dear. The last two lines have my mind
reeling with emotion.

*hugs*

hope all is well hun!

~Breezy

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Astralbermudian on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 12:19:33 PM AEST
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heya this was really good Brew. I just wanted to stop by and thank you for the reviews, they made me smile, you described me perfectly, I must be looking like an idiot just smiling here. Well you seem to be quite used to writing so keep doing it!

Re: Whispers that can not be Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by halli on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 03:04:08 PM AEST
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its great brew really emotional and it rings true.

~halli

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