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Array ( [sid] => 112721 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Final Conflict [time] => 2006-01-07 10:11:11 [hometext] => A poem i wrote one night when i thought i had lost everything(i wasn't sure whether you could swear on this or not so i blanked them out anyway) [bodytext] => FINAL CONFLICT

Staring at the TV
Something on my mind
No one else can see this
Everyone is blind
Searching through my thoughts
Find somewhere else to hide
The brain contorts
For somewhere deep inside

The conflict lies ahead
A lonely night appears
I still fear to tread
Still blinded by those tears
The nights get longer
No will to live
Pain grows stronger
Nothing more to give

Conflict is near
Deep in my head
Voices I hear
Wish I was dead

Stuck inside this ********
Just too much to bear
No one's watching
Does anybody care?
Suicide's appealing
I must be going nuts
My body's reeling
'Cause I don't have the guts

Friends don't give a ****
Couldn't care a less
Guess I'm out of luck
What a ******* mess
Suppose it's time to try again
Slit these wrists but don't know when
Hold the blade, give it a twist
Darkness prevails, through the mist

Conflict is here
Darkness is coming
Voices I hear
Now seem to summon [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Black_Rainbow [notes] => |||||||Incorrect spelling has been corrected, as requested. Also, this submission has been partially edited out, due to the use of letters to indicate banned words. Note: Failure to adhere to site rules can result in the termination of your membership. Consider yourself warned! Thank you. ♦Moderator_14♦||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Final Conflict

Contributed by Black_Rainbow on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 10:11:11 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



FINAL CONFLICT

Staring at the TV
Something on my mind
No one else can see this
Everyone is blind
Searching through my thoughts
Find somewhere else to hide
The brain contorts
For somewhere deep inside

The conflict lies ahead
A lonely night appears
I still fear to tread
Still blinded by those tears
The nights get longer
No will to live
Pain grows stronger
Nothing more to give

Conflict is near
Deep in my head
Voices I hear
Wish I was dead

Stuck inside this ********
Just too much to bear
No one's watching
Does anybody care?
Suicide's appealing
I must be going nuts
My body's reeling
'Cause I don't have the guts

Friends don't give a ****
Couldn't care a less
Guess I'm out of luck
What a ******* mess
Suppose it's time to try again
Slit these wrists but don't know when
Hold the blade, give it a twist
Darkness prevails, through the mist

Conflict is here
Darkness is coming
Voices I hear
Now seem to summon




Copyright © Black_Rainbow ... [ 2006-01-07 10:11:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Final Conflict (User Rating: 1 )
by dc on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 12:30:23 PM AEST
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Nice write - Hope you're feeling stronger.


Re: Final Conflict (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 01:53:00 PM AEST
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hey, i can relate alot to your poem. i just posted one called i'll miss you. if you wanna check it out.. hope things are better for you now and in the future. blessings.
J




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