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Eyes piercing black as night
Running her cloak flowing behind
She reaches the edge and takes flight

Watching he is mesmerized
As she morphs before his eyes
Flying soaring free on high
Surely if caught spying he will die

His heart light as he watches
Her circling high aloft
She dives close barely touching
Her feathers silky and soft

Then high above she climbs
Exploding into a mass of shooting stars
Leaving a wonderful vision
For many to see near and far

Now with every raven’s call
Or the stars go shooting by
He recalls that mysterious maiden
And with awe lets out a sigh

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Maidens Burst

Contributed by NoSaint on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 01:14:45 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Hair dark as ravens wings
Eyes piercing black as night
Running her cloak flowing behind
She reaches the edge and takes flight

Watching he is mesmerized
As she morphs before his eyes
Flying soaring free on high
Surely if caught spying he will die

His heart light as he watches
Her circling high aloft
She dives close barely touching
Her feathers silky and soft

Then high above she climbs
Exploding into a mass of shooting stars
Leaving a wonderful vision
For many to see near and far

Now with every raven’s call
Or the stars go shooting by
He recalls that mysterious maiden
And with awe lets out a sigh

Copyright Â© NoSaint ... [ 2006-01-06 13:14:45]
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Re: Maidens Burst (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:12:21 PM AEST
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Excellent writing! such a beautiful imagery.
Congratulations.

(LadyMoon)

Re: Maidens Burst (User Rating: 1 )
by sassydovebird on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:25:16 PM AEST
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awesome...such sweet fantasy..wow,i love it so much....sassy

Re: Maidens Burst (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:15:39 PM AEST
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a dreamy write my friend, its so light and mysterious and happy beneath the surface, I love that!

Huggersssssssssssss
little star

Re: Maidens Burst (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 07:22:00 PM AEST
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*bravo* a very well penned piece of poetry which enthralls the reader from start to finish.
This I think is the first time I read any of ur work and it definately wont be the last. Well done and thanks so much for sharing ur wonderful work with us.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: Maidens Burst (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 08:55:36 PM AEST
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Marvelous Shari, what a delightful concept! My Mind's Eye saw everything, and even heard his sigh! I don't know what it was that "turned you on" but these poems are great, and hope you aren't turned off for our sakes!
Bravo!
Warm love
consue

Re: Maidens Burst (User Rating: 1 )
by crow6279 on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 09:51:48 AM AEST
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I like this very much. So much imagery and imagination...and yearning...that is what it stirs within me

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