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Array ( [sid] => 112661 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Star light [time] => 2006-01-06 12:17:43 [hometext] => Came up with this while I was in the hospital. Tell me what you think. [bodytext] => Star light,
Star bright
First star I see tonight
Wish I may, wish I might
Wish the Wish I don’t dream tonight

Sleepless night
Hopeless life
And with I do declare thy holy knife
To stop the pain of thy life

Sleepless life, never more
Time for sleep that I do adore
To hear the words to up pour

For all things to come to an end
Good…bad
But let tonight be thy night
Of never ending rest.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 44 [informant] => dalamar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

Star light

Contributed by dalamar on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 12:17:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

Star light,
Star bright
First star I see tonight
Wish I may, wish I might
Wish the Wish I don’t dream tonight

Sleepless night
Hopeless life
And with I do declare thy holy knife
To stop the pain of thy life

Sleepless life, never more
Time for sleep that I do adore
To hear the words to up pour

For all things to come to an end
Good…bad
But let tonight be thy night
Of never ending rest.

Copyright Â© dalamar ... [ 2006-01-06 12:17:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Star light (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:19:46 PM AEST
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Very good work! beautifully writen.

Re: Star light (User Rating: 1 )
by sassydovebird on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:20:47 PM AEST
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i feel such sadness,desolation..one should not wish for life to end..only continue in a better way..so touching..very well written....sassy

Re: Star light (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 07:34:31 PM AEST
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Such a sad thought provoking write. One should never wish their life to end, but wish of better brighter days ahead. A sad very well penned piece of poetry.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: Star light (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessie53067 on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:46:35 PM AEST
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...yeah so I wasn't gonna comment on mulitiple works and look like I was reading through everything even though I am, but damn hun this is just...

*heart grab wrench twist pull out and throw on floor motion*

Yeah.

-Jessie

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