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Array ( [sid] => 112652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shoe. [time] => 2006-01-06 09:18:11 [hometext] => just another one of my poems .. plz feel free to comment!!! [bodytext] => Andrew had a pair of old shoes but he argued over a bamboo .

Andrew blew it all out because he wanted a bamboo instead of his old shoes.

Andrew got so blue so he went boo.

I didnt see no break through in all of this.

So me and Andrew went for a ride on a canoe hoping he would forget about his old shoes.

Then we went and brought some cashews to eat .

Then Andrew chew all of his cashews up.

I don't have a clue why andrew loved his old shoes.

The dew got bad that morning trying to find andrew's old shoes.

So we went and drew a few pair of old shoes.

Then Andrew got the flu Because he ate some glue.

Then I took andrew to get him a new hairdo ,

After he shampoo his hair and went to look for his old shoes.

Then Andrew threw his old shoes out the window , And decided to get a tattoo instead .

I WAS SO SHOCKED 'CAUSE HE WANTED TO GET A TATTOO .. I CRIED ON A TISSUE.

Then after all of that we went to the zoo. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 43 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Shoe.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 09:18:11 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Andrew had a pair of old shoes but he argued over a bamboo .

Andrew blew it all out because he wanted a bamboo instead of his old shoes.

Andrew got so blue so he went boo.

I didnt see no break through in all of this.

So me and Andrew went for a ride on a canoe hoping he would forget about his old shoes.

Then we went and brought some cashews to eat .

Then Andrew chew all of his cashews up.

I don't have a clue why andrew loved his old shoes.

The dew got bad that morning trying to find andrew's old shoes.

So we went and drew a few pair of old shoes.

Then Andrew got the flu Because he ate some glue.

Then I took andrew to get him a new hairdo ,

After he shampoo his hair and went to look for his old shoes.

Then Andrew threw his old shoes out the window , And decided to get a tattoo instead .

I WAS SO SHOCKED 'CAUSE HE WANTED TO GET A TATTOO .. I CRIED ON A TISSUE.

Then after all of that we went to the zoo.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-01-06 09:18:11]
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Re: Shoe. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:15:32 PM AEST
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Very nice rhyming sceme...Well done.

Jeff

Re: Shoe. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:33:56 PM AEST
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beautiful in an outreagious way, btw, nice name, Autumn, lol i mean this is so easy 2 read very storish like quality, ok a few misspelled word's but basicaly deffinately refreshingly unique . . .

Ben

Re: Shoe. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 02:04:22 AM AEST
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Heeheehee...cute! So did Andrew get a tatoo of his old shoes? ;-)

Tim
:-)

Re: Shoe. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:48:23 PM AEST
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You really are one that shares a lot of emotion, your poem is sweet, it sends out many messages. Wonderful words, expressing life, day in day out... not negativity, just expressions, and your poems will help many. You truly write from your heart. Keep writing and posting.. Raquel Leah

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