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Array ( [sid] => 112649 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bring me back down [time] => 2006-01-06 06:46:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There is so much there
Yet I cannot see
What is directly in front of me

I want to scream
I want to hide
But why should I have so much pride?

I want to know
What I should do
And I haven't got one single clue

So don't bring me down
Don't drag me down
I'm sick of feeling like your stupid clown

I'm not here for you
But I wish I could
Just to be who I know I should

Leave me alone
Get out of sight
And please don't awake tonight

I need some time
To sit and stare
Our lives, my friend, I will compare

You know me
Too well now
And to me, you kneel and bow

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Bring me back down

Contributed by tres_estrellas on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 06:46:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



There is so much there
Yet I cannot see
What is directly in front of me

I want to scream
I want to hide
But why should I have so much pride?

I want to know
What I should do
And I haven't got one single clue

So don't bring me down
Don't drag me down
I'm sick of feeling like your stupid clown

I'm not here for you
But I wish I could
Just to be who I know I should

Leave me alone
Get out of sight
And please don't awake tonight

I need some time
To sit and stare
Our lives, my friend, I will compare

You know me
Too well now
And to me, you kneel and bow





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Re: Bring me back down (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 04:36:34 PM AEST
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Três estrelas...very familiar language to me :)

Sad poem... pain...sorrow...yet beautifully written.

Good work!




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