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Pools of peace and hope redeeming
Closer still, dare I to gaze
Light of moon upon them plays
Let our souls, as one, entwine
Grant me this, thy kiss of wine
Turn my tears to loving sighs
Angel with the amber eyes

Should I fail in this my quest
Still the heart within my chest
Take from me this useless breath
Give thy love or give me death
Yea, to live is dark and vain
Nothing more than lonely pain
In your hands my future lies
Angel with the amber eyes

L. Carling c2006
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Amber Eyes

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 05:15:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

See her eyes of amber gleaming
Pools of peace and hope redeeming
Closer still, dare I to gaze
Light of moon upon them plays
Let our souls, as one, entwine
Grant me this, thy kiss of wine
Turn my tears to loving sighs
Angel with the amber eyes

Should I fail in this my quest
Still the heart within my chest
Take from me this useless breath
Give thy love or give me death
Yea, to live is dark and vain
Nothing more than lonely pain
In your hands my future lies
Angel with the amber eyes

L. Carling c2006

Copyright © Rakerman1999 ... [ 2006-01-05 17:15:47]
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Re: Amber Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 05:52:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful as ever, Larry...
Jenni

Re: Amber Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangos on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 06:30:20 PM AEST
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this is a lovely piece

nice job

Re: Amber Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 08:28:13 PM AEST
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Amazing larry, never fail to keep me wanting more

~Clark

Re: Amber Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 09:43:42 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful and awesome.

Take care.

Scott

Re: Amber Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 07:40:15 PM AEST
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Sue *applauds loudly*. Larry this is absolutely sensational. You have such a flare with a pen. A truly talented and gifted poet who has such an amazing way with words. One never tires of reading ur remarkable work Larry. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: Amber Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:59:31 AM AEST
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Beautifully penned Larry I loved the imagery
in this as well as the rhyme scheme. Thanks
for sharing this.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Amber Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 09:59:12 PM AEST
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Larry, you are one of a kind, as is your writes.

Rock on my friend....Mike

Re: Amber Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 06:08:34 AM AEST
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Larry, this one made we weak at the knees. Good thing I'm a well balanced hetero, because these lines are sold gold arrows of cupid, my friend.

Spike

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