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It beats no more
The words “I love you”
Couldn’t replace what I saw
So it’s back to the bottle
As I pick up my pen
And write about how it was
Way back then
‘If only’ were the words
On which I relied
But now have become the two I despise
So it’s back to green eyes
And those forced smiles
If it meant I were with you
I would walk for miles
Tears staining the page
As I write this all down
I never thought it would be this hard
Not having you around
We were meant to be together
From now ‘til the end
But now this road
Has hit a bend
I awake from my dream
And it hits me as I fall
None of this matters
I never had you at all [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 48 [informant] => just_ace [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Dream

Contributed by just_ace on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:30:10 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My hearts in pieces
It beats no more
The words “I love you”
Couldn’t replace what I saw
So it’s back to the bottle
As I pick up my pen
And write about how it was
Way back then
‘If only’ were the words
On which I relied
But now have become the two I despise
So it’s back to green eyes
And those forced smiles
If it meant I were with you
I would walk for miles
Tears staining the page
As I write this all down
I never thought it would be this hard
Not having you around
We were meant to be together
From now ‘til the end
But now this road
Has hit a bend
I awake from my dream
And it hits me as I fall
None of this matters
I never had you at all

Copyright Â© just_ace ... [ 2006-01-05 02:30:10]
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Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jimmato on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:41:19 AM AEST
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this is good-> heart felt & honest. Lose rhythm a couple of times but held together ok. Cheers

Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:39:42 PM AEST
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very sad. i hope you got over it and found someone else. Good write!

Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:46:21 AM AEST
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Some dreams are so real they put in a place and time
Feelings still pine
Wanting not wanting the feeling at all
Yet we fall
Hanging on
Falling down
Flying high
For nothing we sigh

I like this poem you place me there

Good writing

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