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Array ( [sid] => 112575 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sick act [time] => 2006-01-04 20:55:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => flesh and rot a fragrant smell a bouquet for the senses
walking dead we hold our head divided by picket fences
a riot act in chains we crack follow with out a lead
forgetting what we already know we forget of others needs

peeling walls a burnt up dream a value lost in flames
a needy son with lighter fun acting with out blame
anger and a loss of value for all thats right
do not care what family thinks we cause the things that strife

a needy girl out for a twirl fifteen going on thirty
in a place she shouldnt be in she starts to get a little flirty
an older man who has a plan he tells her he is only twenty
she ends up in a hollow grave full of promises that left plenty

it sick how we act in the fact that we live on borrowed time
death and crime or a little white line a tarnish on the mind
we all react on the fact that we give more then we recieve
but in our heart we know the start how to truly believe



[comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 6 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
sick act

Contributed by lostrelic on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:55:59 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



flesh and rot a fragrant smell a bouquet for the senses
walking dead we hold our head divided by picket fences
a riot act in chains we crack follow with out a lead
forgetting what we already know we forget of others needs

peeling walls a burnt up dream a value lost in flames
a needy son with lighter fun acting with out blame
anger and a loss of value for all thats right
do not care what family thinks we cause the things that strife

a needy girl out for a twirl fifteen going on thirty
in a place she shouldnt be in she starts to get a little flirty
an older man who has a plan he tells her he is only twenty
she ends up in a hollow grave full of promises that left plenty

it sick how we act in the fact that we live on borrowed time
death and crime or a little white line a tarnish on the mind
we all react on the fact that we give more then we recieve
but in our heart we know the start how to truly believe







Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2006-01-04 20:55:59]
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Re: sick act (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 09:15:57 PM AEST
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WOW. thats all i can say. wow.
words esacpe me. This was brilliantly written. I'm very glad you shared it with YPDC, it's very much appreciated.
Keep up the amazing work!
-trini


Re: sick act (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:27:15 PM AEST
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Long time no see my friend.

Wow, this one really brings out the senses.
In a way you could say it made my skin crawl.

I enjoyed reading this.

~Shannon


Re: sick act (User Rating: 1 )
by frankcube on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:42:08 PM AEST
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This poem is amazing. Truly, the level of depth that arises from your brilliant words are intertwined in an array of magical interpretation. I loved it.

Please check out my latest poem 'Don't Worry' by Frankcube.




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