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Array ( [sid] => 112512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Slow Suicide [time] => 2006-01-03 20:01:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the first time I cut,
I showed you
it was only fifth grade,
you said you did too

you asked:
will I die with a gun?
no:
a razor
I will feel the blood;
feel myself fade away
lost in an intoxicating red haze

imperfect and fake
engraved in my arms,
as for the names on my body:
of the people I've harmed

I said sorry...meant it too
written in blood on the floor
I dont have any to spare,
or write any more

you saw me there
I saw you smile,
you saw me cry
like I hadn't done in a while

the words written on your face,
that feeling only you can replace,
is just a distant memory

as I lay dieing
your silent suicide too
I'm glad my last thought
was of being with you

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SmileSkinDeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Slow Suicide

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 08:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

the first time I cut,
I showed you
it was only fifth grade,
you said you did too

you asked:
will I die with a gun?
no:
a razor
I will feel the blood;
feel myself fade away
lost in an intoxicating red haze

imperfect and fake
engraved in my arms,
as for the names on my body:
of the people I've harmed

I said sorry...meant it too
written in blood on the floor
I dont have any to spare,
or write any more

you saw me there
I saw you smile,
you saw me cry
like I hadn't done in a while

the words written on your face,
that feeling only you can replace,
is just a distant memory

as I lay dieing
your silent suicide too
I'm glad my last thought
was of being with you

Copyright © SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2006-01-03 20:01:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Slow Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 08:05:24 PM AEST
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That actually brought tears to my eyes. How tragic and sad. It explains my feelings every time I cut. I understant and can relate with this poem. Good job.

-May dreams give you wings
Tsubaki

Re: Slow Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by LifeFadingAway on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 07:16:44 PM AEST
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I like it, I just like it, nothing more to say...

Re: Slow Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 03:04:14 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem...as well, i can relate. I loved the second stanza. gr8 work!

~Jessie

Re: Slow Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 03:54:17 PM AEST
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somone who feels like i do is good but it hurts the heart to nice poem

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