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Array ( [sid] => 112505 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dream Boy [time] => 2006-01-03 17:57:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => He's tall and strong and really sweet,
He's the kind of guy I want mom to meet,
He's full of love to give to me
He's the only person i want to see....

no way he'll hurt me ,
no way ill cry,
no way he'll be unfaithful,
and i know why...

He's my dream guy
with a heart of gold
and these big brown eyes
that have my heart on hold
eyes that only see me and never stray
as long as I have him my world's not grey

but then I wake up and I see you there
you dont seem to love me
and you dont seem to care

you tell me I'm ugly
and you dont want to stay
you tell me it's my fault
you decided to stray

you dont hold my hand
and you dont give me love
I'm pretty sure at night
that it's her you dream of

my mom doesnt like you
she told me herself
she didnt like the bruises you left on my face
she thinks that you are a big disgrace

and maybe you are but then so am I
because instead of just leaving I've chosen to cry
I sit by your side and whatch you go out
and when you leave me for days
my heart's full of doubt

but I still dont go I stay and I suffer
and when I go to sleep you become my dream lover...
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Dream Boy

Contributed by Jazzy on Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 05:57:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

He's tall and strong and really sweet,
He's the kind of guy I want mom to meet,
He's full of love to give to me
He's the only person i want to see....

no way he'll hurt me ,
no way ill cry,
no way he'll be unfaithful,
and i know why...

He's my dream guy
with a heart of gold
and these big brown eyes
that have my heart on hold
eyes that only see me and never stray
as long as I have him my world's not grey

but then I wake up and I see you there
you dont seem to love me
and you dont seem to care

you tell me I'm ugly
and you dont want to stay
you tell me it's my fault
you decided to stray

you dont hold my hand
and you dont give me love
I'm pretty sure at night
that it's her you dream of

my mom doesnt like you
she told me herself
she didnt like the bruises you left on my face
she thinks that you are a big disgrace

and maybe you are but then so am I
because instead of just leaving I've chosen to cry
I sit by your side and whatch you go out
and when you leave me for days
my heart's full of doubt

but I still dont go I stay and I suffer
and when I go to sleep you become my dream lover...

Copyright © Jazzy ... [ 2006-01-03 17:57:33]
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Re: Dream Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 01:19:31 AM AEST
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The write itself is nicely done...clearly an honest outpour of emotion. I find the content itself kind of disturbing though...Why just have a 'dream lover' when you sleep? I think you should dump the loser and find your 'dream' while you're awake. No one needs to sit at home, alone, while their mate takes off, whether it be for 'days' or mere hours. Add to the fact that he seems to have you confused with a piece of boxing equipment, and I'd have to say dump him!!! A guy that tells you you're 'ugly', hits you, and leaves you for days on end does NOT and will NOT love you! I'm sure you don't need to be told that...Move on sweetie...you are worth so much more...Take Care.

Scorp.

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