Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:02:51 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 112427 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists [time] => 2006-01-02 01:33:11 [hometext] => This is how I felt at a Disturbed concert [bodytext] => It will make you tremble
It will excite your senses
It may even make you shed a tear

When they rock out on stage
The fists hit the air
And there name starts to be chanted

They are the band of all bands
They are the gods of the music industry
They are Disturbed

The sight of the thousands of fists in the air
Will excite you
It will entrance you

The sight will make you scream
It will make you throw your fist up
And shout with all your might

The sight of ten thousand fists in the air
Will be stuck in your mind
For the rest of your life [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Poetic_Soul_of_Iowa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists

Contributed by Poetic_Soul_of_Iowa on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 01:33:11 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

It will make you tremble
It will excite your senses
It may even make you shed a tear

When they rock out on stage
The fists hit the air
And there name starts to be chanted

They are the band of all bands
They are the gods of the music industry
They are Disturbed

The sight of the thousands of fists in the air
Will excite you
It will entrance you

The sight will make you scream
It will make you throw your fist up
And shout with all your might

The sight of ten thousand fists in the air
Will be stuck in your mind
For the rest of your life

Copyright © Poetic_Soul_of_Iowa ... [ 2006-01-02 01:33:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 02:25:26 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i love disturbed...this poem describes how music can get inside you and how awesome concerts are

Re: The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:31:36 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

dont know the band but loved the imagery, good read :-)

Re: The Sight of Ten Thousand Fists (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 01:08:38 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I follow Shmokin's words. I really loved the way you brought the reader into one of your memories. I could almost see it.
Take care.
David

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com