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Array ( [sid] => 112330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy I'm Comming Home [time] => 2005-12-30 22:56:10 [hometext] => My dad died 6 years ago this march and im ready to be with him comments welcome [bodytext] => my daddy's in heavon
calling me home
to the place where
wild angels roam

this prison called earth
is no place for me
I'm destined for greatness
I'm destined to be free

so daddy I'm on my way
I'm comming home at last
the angel of death is comming
and he's moving so fast

so clear a spot for me
at your heavenly table
and lets enjoy our time
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Daddy I'm Comming Home

Contributed by cashncoe on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:56:10 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

my daddy's in heavon
calling me home
to the place where
wild angels roam

this prison called earth
is no place for me
I'm destined for greatness
I'm destined to be free

so daddy I'm on my way
I'm comming home at last
the angel of death is comming
and he's moving so fast

so clear a spot for me
at your heavenly table
and lets enjoy our time
while were willing and able

Copyright © cashncoe ... [ 2005-12-30 22:56:10]
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Re: Daddy I'm Comming Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrochick on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:03:34 AM AEST
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thats really good. and sad, and im sorry.

Re: Daddy I'm Comming Home (User Rating: 1 )
by gigglez08 on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:18:15 AM AEST
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sad poem

Re: Daddy I'm Comming Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezer08 on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:34:54 AM AEST
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well, i do have to say that this is a beautiful write. my father died when i was 2 so i understand how you feel about wanting to be with him. if you look at my poems, youll find one that is called "Daddy, I'm Letting Go" youll understand the title when you read it. good write and keep it up. congrats
~Breeze

Re: Daddy I'm Comming Home (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 04:01:46 AM AEST
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very well done. I lost my mother 2 years ago and I miss having some one who I could lean on no matter what the issue.

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