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Array ( [sid] => 112325 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => thay call this wrong...thay call me wrong... [time] => 2005-12-30 22:05:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => something about this, about what is said, reminds me of something someone once did. your probably sitting there, there all bundeled up, warm free of fears, fears that suround me to which there is no end.

the end would be nice, but attemting so many times, he refuses me..why must i suffer in a place like this, its not ment for me. no one likes me. thay call me wrong. thay call what i do, what i am. who i love wrong!

why is it wrong, your so called "God" is a ***** lunatic. get over him get over your self. see people for who thay are...i'm leave you with this only because, this time he took me in..and now i'm gone. your stupidity cause so many deaths and your not awear of it. your the one who thay call death..think about it......

good bye socitey. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 13 [informant] => fake_emptyness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

thay call this wrong...thay call me wrong...

Contributed by fake_emptyness on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:05:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

something about this, about what is said, reminds me of something someone once did. your probably sitting there, there all bundeled up, warm free of fears, fears that suround me to which there is no end.

the end would be nice, but attemting so many times, he refuses me..why must i suffer in a place like this, its not ment for me. no one likes me. thay call me wrong. thay call what i do, what i am. who i love wrong!

why is it wrong, your so called "God" is a ***** lunatic. get over him get over your self. see people for who thay are...i'm leave you with this only because, this time he took me in..and now i'm gone. your stupidity cause so many deaths and your not awear of it. your the one who thay call death..think about it......

good bye socitey.

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Re: thay call this wrong...thay call me wrong... (User Rating: 1 )
by brittaney on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:10:05 PM AEST
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I've been through some pretty hard times myself. My sister and mom both died of cancer, my best friend killed himself, and to be honest with you, God is the only thing that keeps me going. I can relate to you in a lot of ways, but trust me, God will be there for you.
Brittaney~

Re: thay call this wrong...thay call me wrong... (User Rating: 1 )
by HatchetGirl on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:34:10 PM AEST
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I loved how you incorporated... the 'so called "God"'... and your so right... the people that believe in God the most are the first to judge and not realize that their own beliefs tell them that "God" created everyone and everything.

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