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Array ( [sid] => 112285 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Loves Promise [time] => 2005-12-30 06:27:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’m awake, though very tired
The feeling of his arms around me has been expired
I need to feel that comfort once more
From anyone, anywhere, just knock on my door

I’ll let you in, just hold me tight
Lay with me and stay the night
Let me hide inside your chest
And every truth I will confess

I will fall victim inside your embrace
Show me hope and give me grace
Just reach out and caress my face
Look deep in my eyes, every secret you could trace

I’ll lock our legs so you can’t escape
We’ll have the same body shape
We will drown in this euphoric state
And give in to this act of fate

Show you need me, show you care
Promise me you’ll always be there
Don’t disappear as those in my past
Just love me and make it last

Love me here and love me true
Love me like you’re supposed to
Love me with passion and love me with tears
Love me through all of your fears

Now promise me this, with your sweet kiss
Let’s fall into the abyss of this bliss
As we make our way into the deep of sleep
Knowing that this night is ours to keep [comments] => 1 [counter] => 487 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bluoreo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Loves Promise

Contributed by bluoreo on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 06:27:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I’m awake, though very tired
The feeling of his arms around me has been expired
I need to feel that comfort once more
From anyone, anywhere, just knock on my door

I’ll let you in, just hold me tight
Lay with me and stay the night
Let me hide inside your chest
And every truth I will confess

I will fall victim inside your embrace
Show me hope and give me grace
Just reach out and caress my face
Look deep in my eyes, every secret you could trace

I’ll lock our legs so you can’t escape
We’ll have the same body shape
We will drown in this euphoric state
And give in to this act of fate

Show you need me, show you care
Promise me you’ll always be there
Don’t disappear as those in my past
Just love me and make it last

Love me here and love me true
Love me like you’re supposed to
Love me with passion and love me with tears
Love me through all of your fears

Now promise me this, with your sweet kiss
Let’s fall into the abyss of this bliss
As we make our way into the deep of sleep
Knowing that this night is ours to keep




Copyright © bluoreo ... [ 2005-12-30 06:27:53]
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Re: My Loves Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldtsweetie33 on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 01:23:03 AM AEST
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love this poem its amazing




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