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how can this one person make me feel so many emotions at once
happy sad, good bad, cheerful and mad
how can he not see the pain he as brought to me
i cried and hope that our friendship hadnt died
but who was i kiddin i am not like any of the girls hes dated
im probably hated and just dont know that friendship is the closest i am ever gonna get to happiness
everything is a mess up inside my head
to him i am probably dead
i can not hold a candle to the girl his heart belongs to
next to her my light cant seem to shine through
in this story hes prince charming and im the peasant
sometimes i wish he could see i am like a present not as appealing wrapping on the outside
but the gift concealed in this box is something everyone wants
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prince charming

Contributed by gizmo2010 on Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 09:29:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

my heart is broken should of never spoken of the feelings i had
how can this one person make me feel so many emotions at once
happy sad, good bad, cheerful and mad
how can he not see the pain he as brought to me
i cried and hope that our friendship hadnt died
but who was i kiddin i am not like any of the girls hes dated
im probably hated and just dont know that friendship is the closest i am ever gonna get to happiness
everything is a mess up inside my head
to him i am probably dead
i can not hold a candle to the girl his heart belongs to
next to her my light cant seem to shine through
in this story hes prince charming and im the peasant
sometimes i wish he could see i am like a present not as appealing wrapping on the outside
but the gift concealed in this box is something everyone wants
love sealed with a kiss i hope he gets it

Copyright © gizmo2010 ... [ 2005-12-29 21:29:12]
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Re: prince charming (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 09:56:04 PM AEST
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Don't worry. If it's meant to be, he'll come around. Awesome write. Very heart-felt.

Re: prince charming (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 01:00:51 AM AEST
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dont worry if it is for real he will come around and he will want you.awsome write.

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