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more than yesterday
more than you will ever know
and wouldn’t have it any other way

I hate you
for being so right
for being so perfect
spite is the only ray of light
and you decided to spur it
love is just no good
you got me hooked
now im addicted to it
to you
too honest
too faithful
I created my own weakness
you were only you
perfectly seamless
I never knew what to do
absolutely shameless
rendered silent
by the starkness of your words
the sweet sweet rapture
the things you needn’t say
the sorrowful look
the pain written on your face
I wish I could take back
my steps retraced
I cant
what’s done cannot replace
what’s said cannot be swallowed
my existentialism unforgiven
left my broken heart to hollow

I love you
is all that I could say
now I completely regret it
and wouldn’t have it any other way

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Bittersweet Disasterpiece(Moving On)

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 04:02:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I miss you
more than yesterday
more than you will ever know
and wouldn’t have it any other way

I hate you
for being so right
for being so perfect
spite is the only ray of light
and you decided to spur it
love is just no good
you got me hooked
now im addicted to it
to you
too honest
too faithful
I created my own weakness
you were only you
perfectly seamless
I never knew what to do
absolutely shameless
rendered silent
by the starkness of your words
the sweet sweet rapture
the things you needn’t say
the sorrowful look
the pain written on your face
I wish I could take back
my steps retraced
I cant
what’s done cannot replace
what’s said cannot be swallowed
my existentialism unforgiven
left my broken heart to hollow

I love you
is all that I could say
now I completely regret it
and wouldn’t have it any other way

Copyright Â© SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2005-12-29 16:02:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bittersweet Disasterpiece(Moving On) (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 03:09:23 PM AEST
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awesomer job on this! *High Five* I loved it. I know its hard getting over someone...it takes lots and i mean LOTS of time. Great job!

~Jessie

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