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Array ( [sid] => 112225 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BEATINGS. [time] => 2005-12-28 22:23:54 [hometext] => THIS IS ABOUT MY SISTER AND WHAT IS HAPPENING TO HER EVERYDAY SO I WROTE THIS POEM ABOUT IT!!!:( [bodytext] => My sister's boyfriend always beats her.

My sister always backing off from him.

MY Sister doesn't do nothing about her boyfriend beating her.

When my sister is with us she says it is like begin there because she is so used to the beatings.

I give my sister all the blessings I can give her but she wont leave him.

I dont know how she deals with the beatings.

It is like for long her boyfriend will be digging her grave, I am afraid.

My sister is doing nothing but living with her boyfriend and taking the beatings everyday.

Every evening he comes home and beats her.

My sister has to face this all her life.

MY sister tells me if i leave him i am failing him.

So here goes another beating and the falling to the floor with more bruises of the beatings that her boyfriend

gives her.

My sister doesn't know it hurts our feelings and of course the whole family.

She tells me she is helpless and don't know what to do.

She won't listen to anyone she thinks it is love.

she listens to all of her boyfriend's lies and he tells her he won't do it again.

So the way I look at it he is ruling her life , and it's got to STOP BEFORE HE KILLS HER. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Butterflygirl40 [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
BEATINGS.

Contributed by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:23:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



My sister's boyfriend always beats her.

My sister always backing off from him.

MY Sister doesn't do nothing about her boyfriend beating her.

When my sister is with us she says it is like begin there because she is so used to the beatings.

I give my sister all the blessings I can give her but she wont leave him.

I dont know how she deals with the beatings.

It is like for long her boyfriend will be digging her grave, I am afraid.

My sister is doing nothing but living with her boyfriend and taking the beatings everyday.

Every evening he comes home and beats her.

My sister has to face this all her life.

MY sister tells me if i leave him i am failing him.

So here goes another beating and the falling to the floor with more bruises of the beatings that her boyfriend

gives her.

My sister doesn't know it hurts our feelings and of course the whole family.

She tells me she is helpless and don't know what to do.

She won't listen to anyone she thinks it is love.

she listens to all of her boyfriend's lies and he tells her he won't do it again.

So the way I look at it he is ruling her life , and it's got to STOP BEFORE HE KILLS HER.




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Re: BEATINGS. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 12:34:18 AM AEST
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I am soooooo sorry to hear about this. Why do people do this? People dish out the abuse and people take the abuse. Please you need to drag her away from this before the worst does happen!

This is exactly what I have said before...this is not love. Love is patient. Love is kind and she may think she loves him but he definitely does not love her.

I don't know what else to say. It takes courage to be able to write about such things but it takes more courage to do something about it.

Tim


Re: BEATINGS. (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 09:02:01 PM AEST
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why doesnt any one besides chase09 comment me on what is happening to my sister this is something that is happening for real it isnt maded up ...... if this was happening to your sister then i would comment you on it..... makes me kind of sad that noone cares.... lol ....


Re: BEATINGS. (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:11:34 AM AEST
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than go tell your sister to go get help maybe you should also
this is a poets site not dear abby
freespirt




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