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Array ( [sid] => 112195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take It Slow. [time] => 2005-12-28 03:06:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Bursting flames
Over the horizon.
We lay on the sand,
Warm breeze floats
Across the land.
Salty water licks
Lazily at my calves.
I stare at my other half.
The fiery sunlight
Glinting in your eyes.
A smile on your face,
A kiss on the lips.
How could I have known
It would be like this?
Salty skin, rusty hearts.
We're new to this,
But it's a start.
Basking in the early light,
Exploring every night.
With your hands
Buried in my hair.
Your face buried in my neck.
I take in your scent
And soak up your caress.
Let's take it slow.
No reason to rush.
I want this to be right.
I've got a feeling about us. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 2 [informant] => dragonfly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Take It Slow.

Contributed by dragonfly on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:06:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Bursting flames
Over the horizon.
We lay on the sand,
Warm breeze floats
Across the land.
Salty water licks
Lazily at my calves.
I stare at my other half.
The fiery sunlight
Glinting in your eyes.
A smile on your face,
A kiss on the lips.
How could I have known
It would be like this?
Salty skin, rusty hearts.
We're new to this,
But it's a start.
Basking in the early light,
Exploring every night.
With your hands
Buried in my hair.
Your face buried in my neck.
I take in your scent
And soak up your caress.
Let's take it slow.
No reason to rush.
I want this to be right.
I've got a feeling about us.

Copyright © dragonfly ... [ 2005-12-28 03:06:52]
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Re: Take It Slow. (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 08:03:20 AM AEST
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Nice peice :-)

Re: Take It Slow. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:03:18 AM AEST
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Interesting format here, but it definately works. You have great visuals here and the sentiment comes across very well,
Nice write!!

Re: Take It Slow. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 02:23:25 PM AEST
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great write I really enjoyed it. I really liked the ending its very sweet.

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