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Array ( [sid] => 112123 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Romance Story [time] => 2005-12-26 18:38:28 [hometext] => I know we all can relate to this poem one way or another. this poem is very close to my heart. [bodytext] => All his days have gone by
as though nothing left to strive,
Not knowing that they'd cross
in his eyes she was lost,
Pitter patter her heart slowly increasing in beats
drizzling all that is beautiful at her feet,
A smile at him and through her gaze
all he sees is the suns heavenly rays,
Sweet beauty and love she was given
yet in doubt she had left it to be taken,
The past still dwells deep
still crying before she sleep,

Through the distant field of dispair
shes offered hope and a breath of fesh air,
A new light she has found
even through its outward bound,
Taking this step is a leap
not knowing what he may uncover underneath,
Knowing is what she must do
for a chance like this never comes in two,
When love finds you, you should stay
for all that it brings may never go away,
Happiness as far as my eyes can see
is this the man God meant for me?

An understanding person, a gentle caring soul
and I saw love warm, and a heart of gold,
I saw tears stung his eyes
yes he knew his wife has arrived,
Casting away all her deamons within
she became the fairytale princess for him,
Emotions rang up a storm
in his mind an unthinkable beauty has been formed,
This protective warrior has come about
for this awesome creature that had sprout,
Each day his love has grown
for me to see what no one has ever been shown,

Passion and love from his core
a level not even he knew before,
A fire burns, a flame ignight
his beauty's passion has taken flight,
All her insecurities have been washed away
for her knight has brought light to a new day,
Keep him! Faith is on your side
give up what you thought was pride,
Your man is here, take hold
when do you think a chance will be as bold?
He has found her, she has found him
only blissfull happiness will follow them.



[comments] => 5 [counter] => 541 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mistifi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A Romance Story

Contributed by mistifi on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 06:38:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



All his days have gone by
as though nothing left to strive,
Not knowing that they'd cross
in his eyes she was lost,
Pitter patter her heart slowly increasing in beats
drizzling all that is beautiful at her feet,
A smile at him and through her gaze
all he sees is the suns heavenly rays,
Sweet beauty and love she was given
yet in doubt she had left it to be taken,
The past still dwells deep
still crying before she sleep,

Through the distant field of dispair
shes offered hope and a breath of fesh air,
A new light she has found
even through its outward bound,
Taking this step is a leap
not knowing what he may uncover underneath,
Knowing is what she must do
for a chance like this never comes in two,
When love finds you, you should stay
for all that it brings may never go away,
Happiness as far as my eyes can see
is this the man God meant for me?

An understanding person, a gentle caring soul
and I saw love warm, and a heart of gold,
I saw tears stung his eyes
yes he knew his wife has arrived,
Casting away all her deamons within
she became the fairytale princess for him,
Emotions rang up a storm
in his mind an unthinkable beauty has been formed,
This protective warrior has come about
for this awesome creature that had sprout,
Each day his love has grown
for me to see what no one has ever been shown,

Passion and love from his core
a level not even he knew before,
A fire burns, a flame ignight
his beauty's passion has taken flight,
All her insecurities have been washed away
for her knight has brought light to a new day,
Keep him! Faith is on your side
give up what you thought was pride,
Your man is here, take hold
when do you think a chance will be as bold?
He has found her, she has found him
only blissfull happiness will follow them.







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Re: A Romance Story (User Rating: 1 )
by LostAmbition on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 11:30:58 PM AEST
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Wow!
Best wishes to you!
Sounds like what I want:)
Very nice the way u did this
rhyming ect.
Good poem


Re: A Romance Story (User Rating: 1 )
by crow6279 on Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:02:53 PM AEST
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Very good write. I liked the pacing and the words...and hope to read many more submissions from you


Re: A Romance Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 07:48:56 AM AEST
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Well done, a joy to read


Re: A Romance Story (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 07:53:14 PM AEST
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A new light she has found
even through its outward bound...


Something in that line I just like. Congratualtions to you both, you sound content. Nicely laid out emotions here. Keep it up!



Scorp.


Re: A Romance Story (User Rating: 1 )
by LiL_Rebel on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 09:29:29 PM AEST
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i strongly believe this is the best poem i have ever read.. i can feel your pain and emotion in this poem as well as a detailed vision of whats going on.. girl.. keep writing and i'll keep reading lol take care




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