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Lonesomeness
Taunting evermore
No smell of sulfer
Each sinner travels Different levels
This pit of no return
Each heart forever burns
Forever yearns
Body renued body and soul
Everlasting this abyss this hole The very bowles of earth
sulfer
No fire in hell
Fire burns within every self
Who can I blame
Truth is my shame
Each level a harder degree
Instilled within each one a belief
Fiends I knew know me not
Cursing God and all a lot
Demonds taunt and prod
Had your chance and you fail
agony agnoy always within
Selvishness is every sin
Gone every thought of pride
Fire burns deep in each inside
Judgement comes to knowlage known
To each is given a soul when born
Some cried I'm saved then cast aside
Love of God not one here abide
Never in my darkest thought
lord Lord I'm saved,but I'm not
Everlasting this torment of hell
Satan forever casting his spell
Forever I yearn
My God my God yet I burn
Ever so often this reminder sight
Hell cracks open to reveal His Light
Damned to hell now I believe
This fire within and no relief
Come Lord Jesus then I curse
I tell you truth nothing is worse

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Hell

Contributed by Sinned on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 10:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

Longingness
Lonesomeness
Taunting evermore
No smell of sulfer
Each sinner travels Different levels
This pit of no return
Each heart forever burns
Forever yearns
Body renued body and soul
Everlasting this abyss this hole The very bowles of earth
sulfer
No fire in hell
Fire burns within every self
Who can I blame
Truth is my shame
Each level a harder degree
Instilled within each one a belief
Fiends I knew know me not
Cursing God and all a lot
Demonds taunt and prod
Had your chance and you fail
agony agnoy always within
Selvishness is every sin
Gone every thought of pride
Fire burns deep in each inside
Judgement comes to knowlage known
To each is given a soul when born
Some cried I'm saved then cast aside
Love of God not one here abide
Never in my darkest thought
lord Lord I'm saved,but I'm not
Everlasting this torment of hell
Satan forever casting his spell
Forever I yearn
My God my God yet I burn
Ever so often this reminder sight
Hell cracks open to reveal His Light
Damned to hell now I believe
This fire within and no relief
Come Lord Jesus then I curse
I tell you truth nothing is worse

Sinned

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Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 10:51:35 PM AEST
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An interesting piece here.
There are many thought provoking points.
Such as the very concept of Hell.
I believe in 'personal hells' and can very much relate... Despite the environment one may be located in, 'hell' may very well follow an individual, thus creating a constant internal environment, usually accompanying a crestfallen disposition.
This piece reminds me of 'The fragile' by NIN.
"the clouds will part and the sky crack open/ and God himself will reach his f*ck*ng arm through/ just to push you down/ ..."

"No smell of sulfer"
"No fire in hell"
Both of these lines prove that you are expressing terms in figurative and metaphoric language.
As if to express that there is a hell on earth, that exists within our truths, within our sins, inside our souls.

Good work here.
Much enjoyed.

Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 11:30:51 AM AEST
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Yes the Romanticist above is so right.

The concept of hell is perceived by the Muslims, and also Dante as "eternal Ice"

"Both of these lines prove that you are expressing terms in figurative and metaphoric language.
As if to express that there is a hell on earth, that exists within our truths, within our sins, inside our souls."

This I copied from the Romanticist, there is hell or heaven within ourselves. here on earth.
I personally do not dwell on the thought of hell, - - trust in the mercy of all powerful and merciful God.
Great poem though. Have a great Christmas Season.!

Today is St. Stephen, Arch- and Protomartyr of Christendom. and my late husband's name Sake.

Say "Hello" to St. Stephen!

Blessings to you Denis!
Elizabeth

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