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Array ( [sid] => 112018 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bloody Dreams [time] => 2005-12-24 00:07:40 [hometext] => this sorta just popped into my head one day. I like it...but it wasnt what i expected...^ ^; [bodytext] => These bloody dreams
Are all I see
When there’s nothing left
But you and me

I love the way
My hands cup around your throat just right
You know this all too well
So you barely give up without a fight

You look into my eyes
As I squeeze your throat so tight
You try to tell me that I’m crazy
And that this just isn’t right

But how can it wrong
When these bloody dreams are all I see
And when they’re practically screaming
To get you back for hurting me

I can’t just ignore
This dream, which is so strong
I have to follow this dream all the way through
Even if I know in my heart, that it is wrong

‘Cause these bloody dreams
Are all I see
When there’s nothing left
But you and me

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Bloody Dreams

Contributed by Misunderstood_gurl on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 12:07:40 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



These bloody dreams
Are all I see
When there’s nothing left
But you and me

I love the way
My hands cup around your throat just right
You know this all too well
So you barely give up without a fight

You look into my eyes
As I squeeze your throat so tight
You try to tell me that I’m crazy
And that this just isn’t right

But how can it wrong
When these bloody dreams are all I see
And when they’re practically screaming
To get you back for hurting me

I can’t just ignore
This dream, which is so strong
I have to follow this dream all the way through
Even if I know in my heart, that it is wrong

‘Cause these bloody dreams
Are all I see
When there’s nothing left
But you and me





Copyright © Misunderstood_gurl ... [ 2005-12-24 00:07:40]
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Re: Bloody Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:25:06 AM AEST
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a very powerful write. i enjoyed it
keep up the good work
-trini


Re: Bloody Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 05:14:33 PM AEST
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good write keep it up


Re: Bloody Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 01:19:11 PM AEST
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oh, wow. very strong write here! i extremely loved this right. very powerful and very dark. very visual, i don't know if that is good or not. but i could see all of this happening, very well written. great job! i enjoyed it! keep up the good work.

~sprints


Re: Bloody Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 04:04:27 PM AEST
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I hope this feeling stayed a dream
Or in jail you end it would seem
Beware the feeling within your heart
This the feeling that holds you apart

Interesting perspective you have! Must try it one day?





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