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Rustles through the trees
The whispers of your name
Calling to me through the air
Recalling all the days
When your smile pierced my soul
I hear your laughs still…
The stars shine above me
Reminding me of your eyes
Staring back at me
Filled with love
Then filled with tears…
The moon provides the only light
To brighten up the darkness
As you did for years
Yet I was walking with my eyes closed
To clenched to see where I was headed
The sky begins to darken…
As the rainfall pours upon me
Drenching me in sorrow
Like your tears did in the past
And I lay there all alone
For with out you my earth dies…
The wind still echoes your voice
The night is broken by your thought
The moon no longer rises…
Without you my light is gone
I wander through the dark
Lost… confused… trying to dry my eyes
Unable to let you go
Because I need you so much
To guide me where to be
And lay with me here
So I don’t have to remember what we had…
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All alone...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 01:11:40 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I hear the wind blowing
Rustles through the trees
The whispers of your name
Calling to me through the air
Recalling all the days
When your smile pierced my soul
I hear your laughs still…
The stars shine above me
Reminding me of your eyes
Staring back at me
Filled with love
Then filled with tears…
The moon provides the only light
To brighten up the darkness
As you did for years
Yet I was walking with my eyes closed
To clenched to see where I was headed
The sky begins to darken…
As the rainfall pours upon me
Drenching me in sorrow
Like your tears did in the past
And I lay there all alone
For with out you my earth dies…
The wind still echoes your voice
The night is broken by your thought
The moon no longer rises…
Without you my light is gone
I wander through the dark
Lost… confused… trying to dry my eyes
Unable to let you go
Because I need you so much
To guide me where to be
And lay with me here
So I don’t have to remember what we had…
All alone…

Copyright Â© holderofthestone ... [ 2005-12-23 01:11:40]
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Re: All alone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 07:21:02 AM AEST
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Nice read Thanx for sharing :-)

Re: All alone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 08:15:37 AM AEST
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This was simply beautiful.
Thanx :)

Re: All alone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 08:28:14 AM AEST
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very beautiful. She remembers what they had too and you are not alone.

Re: All alone... (User Rating: 1 )
by MissUnderstood on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:56:53 AM AEST
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You used some awesome metaphors in this! I liked this poem a lot, I guess I should say thanks for sharing!

Re: All alone... (User Rating: 1 )
by MissUnderstood on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:56:58 AM AEST
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You used some awesome metaphors in this! I liked this poem a lot, I guess I should say thanks for sharing!

Re: All alone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jyssvw on Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 08:44:04 PM AEST
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this was a well laid out thought
i enjoyed the write

good job here

Re: All alone... (User Rating: 1 )
by spencer on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:09:54 AM AEST
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stunning, absolutely stunning. i'm lost for words!

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